W. Shakespeares sonnet 20/Translated by R. Lee

rlee

[size=200%]我情诗里的男主人兼女主人，
[size=200%]你那娇美的脸庞[size=200%]由大自然亲笔绘就 -
[size=200%]你有着女性的柔肠，却不像有些女人，
[size=200%]性情多变而反复无常。
[size=200%]你明眸善睐，顾盼之间却毫不造作，
[size=200%]目之所及，都熠熠生辉。
[size=200%]你仪表堂堂，人人景仰，
[size=200%]把男男女女的心魂统统摄走。
[size=200%]大自然本来把你造成女儿，
[size=200%]谁知造你时她爱昏了头，
[size=200%]画蛇添足，让我失去了你，
[size=200%]加上那玩意儿对我没有用处。
[size=200%]  可既然她让你供女人欢心，
[size=200%]  那就把爱情给我，把情爱给她们。
[size=200%]A Womans face with natures owne hand painted,
Haste thou the Master Mistris of my passion,
A womans gentle hart but not acquainted
With shifting change as is false womens fashion,
An eye more bright then theirs,_lesse false in rowling:
Gilding the obiect where-vpon it gazeth,
A man in hew all Hews in his controwling,
Which steales mens eyes and womens soules amaseth.
And for a woman wert thou first created,
Till nature as she wrought thee fell a dotinge,
And by addition me of thee defeated,
By adding one thing to my purpose nothing.
But since she prickt thee out for womens pleasure,
Mine be thy loue and thy loues vse their treasure.

铁_冰

老兄，为何列出那么原始的版本？
A Womans face with natures owne hande painted,
Ha?te thou, the Ma?ter Mi?tris of my pa??ion,
A womans gentle hart but not acquainted
With ?hifting change as is fal?e womens fa?hion,
An eye more bright then theirs,le??e fal?e in rowling:
Gilding the obiect where-vpon it gazeth,
A man in hew all Hews in his controwling,
Which ?teales mens eyes and womens ?oules ama?eth,
And for a woman wert thou fir?t created,
Till nature as ?he wrought thee fell a dotinge,
And by addition me of thee defeated,
By adding one thing to my purpo?e nothing.
  But ?ince ?he prickt thee out for womens plea?ure,
  Mine be thy loue and thy loues v?e their trea?ure.

rlee

我担心新版本太多，会有争议，所以选用最原始的版本。