让你的心为我起舞，Let your heart fall for me

秦华

欣赏学习了。问好

铁_冰

What color‘s love, dear, do you remember?
O ‘tis blue, color of eternal sea,
O 'tis white, of the tempting December,
O love me, love, let your heart fall for me,
Just like my love for you, my ardent love,
Which reminds me of these sweetest moments
We spend together; e'en angels above
Admired you and me, their glaring ornaments
Can not compare with your dewy tears fair.
O your fragrance in my breath is sweeter
Than heavenly flowers; our laughter in air
Are sacred songs. O love me, love, my dear,
Let sweetness drown you, and let passion be
Your dancing partner- O love, fall for me.

自娱自乐

欣赏俩位的杰作!

铁皇上的诗味更浓!

铁_冰

我只不过是把楼主的杰作去掉一些音节，使全诗每行具有10-11音节，更接近英文十四行诗的面目。

无心剑

情动于中而赋诗吐心声，欣赏佳作！

无心剑

也来凑凑热闹吧！

What color's love, you remember?
O it's the blue of everlasting sea,
Or the white of alluring December,
O dear, let your heart fall for me,
Just as I show you my earnest love,
Lighting up those sweet moments.
So happy together that angels above
Also envy us; their shiny ornaments
Will be outshone by your dewy tears,
O your fragrant breath is sweeter
Than any flower; our laughter appears
Like a holy song. Fall for me, O lover!
Let passion be your dancing partner;
Let sweetness grow in your life forever!

rlee

To G. A. W.

                   -J.Keats

Nymph of the downward smile,and sidelong glance,
In what diviner moments of the day
Art thou most lovely?When gone far astray
Into the labyrinths of sweet utterance?
Or when serenely wand'ring in a trance
Of sober thought? Or when starting away,
With careless robe, to meet the morning ray,
Thou spar'st the flowers in thy mazy dance?
Haply 'tis when thy ruby lips part sweetly,
And so remain,because thou listenest:
But thou to please wert nurtured so completely
That I can never tell what mood is best.
I shall as soon pronounce which Grace more neatly
Trips it before Apollo than the rest

                         December 1816