转载：济慈的《秋颂》（注释和翻译者不详）

rlee

To Autumn
1
Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness,⑴
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun,⑵
Conspiring with him ⑶how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run;⑷
To bend with apples the moss'd cottage-trees,
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells
With a sweet kernel; to set budding more,
And still more, later flowers for the bees,
Until they think warm days will never cease,
For Summer has o'er-brimm'd their clammy cells.
2
Who hath not seen thee oft⑸ amid thy store?
Sometimes whoever seeks abroad⑹ may find
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
Thy hair sort-lifted by the winnowing wind;
Or on a half-reap'd furrow sound asleep,⑺
Dows'd with the fume of poppies, while thy hook
Spares the next swath and all its twined flowers.
And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep
Steady thy laden head across a brook;
Or by a cyder-press, with patient look,
Thou watchest the last oozings ⑻hours by hours.
3
Where are the songs of Spring? Ay, where are they?
Think not of them, thou hast thy music too,
While barred clouds bloom the soft-dying day,⑼
And touch the stubble-plains with rosy hue;
Then in a waiful choir the small gnats mourn
Among the river sallows,⑽ borne aloft⑾
Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies;
And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn;⑿
Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble ⒀soft
The red-breast whistles form a garden-croft;⒁
And gathering swallows twitter in the skies.
注释：
(1)Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness: 雾气弥漫、果实成熟丰饶的季节（指秋天）。
(2)Maturing sun：使万物成熟的太阳。
(3)him：指太阳。在这里，诗人把秋天和太阳都人格化，因此，conspiring这词的运用就颇具幽默感。
(4)bless/with fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run： 这半句的正常语序是：bless the vines that run round the thatch-eves with fruit，意为：赐福给屋檐周围的葡萄藤累累的果实。
(5)oft： 即为often（古英语词）。
(6)seeks abroad：到户外去走一走。
(7)on a half reap'd furrow sound asleep： 这个句子的前半句在第二、三行，即whoever/may find/Thee sound asleep on a half reaped furrow。
(8)oozings: 徐徐滴下的果汁。
(9)barred clouds bloom the soft dying day：傍晚的天空飘动着艳丽的带状云彩.barrow带状的，条形的，the soft dying day，白昼静静地逝去,bloom，使艳丽;开花。
(10)Sallows： 柳树，柳枝。
(11)Borne alft：高飞。Borne 是bear的过去式，意为：运动，转向：aflot，高高地。
(12)And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn：意为羔羊篚了， 在山坡上大专地吁吁叫。Bourn，地区，领地。
(13)Treble：最高音。
(14)Garden-croft：宅旁的园地。
1
雾气腾腾的季节，果实垒垒的时光，
催熟万物，有把你当作挚友的太阳；
如何把福佑赐予大地，
你与他紧密协商：
让檐下藤蔓爬遍，葡萄串串，
让屋旁生苔老树苹果满枝，熟透飘香；
让榛子果仁香甜饱满，
让葫芦肚皮滚圆鼓胀；
催动更多的蓓蕾不断勃发，
驱使迟到的花朵为蜜蜂绽放；
弄得蜂群相信温暖的日子永无穷尽，
因为夏天早已让蜂巢灌满蜜浆。
2
谁不见你总是守候你的库房？
席地而坐，你会陪伴粮仓。
走出门外人们抬眼寻找，
会发现扬场的风让你发丝飘荡；
或者酣睡在收割中的田垄，
沉醉于罂粟花的馥郁芬芳，
只因野花夹杂其间，
你的镰刀会放过一丛半行。
有时你似乎在拾起散落的庄稼，
跨过溪流，残穗稳稳顶在头上；
或者你久久不肯离开榨汁的机架，
把那渗出的果汁耐心凝望。
3
春天之歌在何方？啊，春天之歌在何方？
你也有你的音乐，不必为此冥思苦想；
当细浪般的云层映出柔和的夕照，
残梗凌乱的田野抹上玫瑰色的霞光；
在那河边的柳树丛中，
小虫一起把悲哀的曲调奏响，
时起时落，随着轻风悠悠飘扬；
篱笆里，蟋蟀同声吟唱，
园中的知更鸟呼哨嘹亮；
山涧那边长大的羊羔咩咩叫唤，
唧唧喳喳，空中的燕子群集飞翔。

自娱自乐

rlee

谢谢！穆旦先生的翻译比较风行，译笔典雅，用词考究，但略有小错。但我觉得这个译本不输于他的，因为似乎在理解上吕先生技高一筹。

rlee

In a letter written to Reynolds* from Winchester, in September, 1819, Keats says: 'How beautiful the season is now--How fine the air. A temperate sharpness about it. Really, without joking, chaste weather--Dian skies--I never liked stubble-fields so much as now--Aye better than the chilly green of the spring. Somehow, a stubble-field looks warm--in the same way that some pictures look warm. This struck me so much in my Sunday's walk that I composed upon it.' What he composed was the Ode To Autumn.
*吴伟仁的《英国文学史及选读》里J. H. Reyalds
另外：a croft is an enclosed plot of farm land. 《二十一世纪大英汉词典》：[英国英语]（住宅附近的）园地；（尤指佃户经营的）小农场。