我也胡写一首，献丑了！

lengshan · 发表于 2010-9-3 15:03:30

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Autumn Rain

Autumn rain means you lie in bed lazy to rise but cannot sleep
Autumn rain means you think of many things far and near none of them deep
Autumn rain means leaves fall flowers wither sky cloudy roads muddy lovers sleepy
Autumn rain means insects weep birds groan walkers frown poets moody
The old older the young riper the cool cooler the bright darken the soft harden
All seem moving towards their final destinations in either earth or heaven…
And then world awakens noises replace silence hand drills drilling women loud complain
As if by magic and all of a sudden, life begins again!

周道模 · 发表于 2010-9-3 15:16:31

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好懂，层次分明，内涵丰富，语感流畅。学习，问好！

木樨黄谷 · 发表于 2010-9-3 18:05:29

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冷杉老师不妨自译一下

童天鉴日 · 发表于 2010-9-3 19:34:00

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学习的一首！问好冷杉老师。请求同木樨，亦或楼下给予汉译哈：）

宛城卧龙 · 发表于 2010-9-4 00:04:55

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问候冷杉学长我也来凑热闹
Autumn Rain
You come softly near
My eaves low,
lashing coyly against
My lonely window-sill.
I take up your graceful body,
But you instantly
Vanish in my bleak memory.

童天鉴日 · 发表于 2010-9-6 12:48:11

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嘿嘿，卧龙好雅兴

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我也胡写一首，献丑了！

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