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[华陀把脉]国内英语界砖家们水平简直令人汗颜喷饭

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发表于 2010-9-4 09:55:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

跟我在科技界所见如出一辄!
Poetry I (June 11, 2008) - 23
Perl of language
Elite of literature
A drama not on a stage
A paint not on a canvas
A song without music
Only masterpieces last forever
Joy, pain, love and hate
Time, space, matter and life
Sparks of inspiration
Secretion of passion
Fruits of creation
What in common is innovation
Poetry II/Puzzles I (August 31, 2008) - 46
In the family of literature
Only poetry is the champion of creative writing
But exactly what is the essence of poetry
From a poet's perspective in modern society?
Sonnets, Jintishi, Villanelle, Ruba'i, Sijo and Sestina
Ode, Ghazal, Pantoum, Rondeau, Haiku, Ghazal and Tanka
Lots of poetic forms
Which one is your top choice?
Narrative Poetry, Epic Poetry and Dramatic Poetry
Satirical Poetry, Lyric Poetry, Verse Fable and Prose Poetry
So many poetic genres
How did Prose Poetry become your most favorite?
Certain poems are based on personal memoir
Certain poems are originated from social observation
Certain poems are inspired by philosophical speculation
What is your source of inspirations when initiating poetry composing?
Joy, sorrow, love and hate in a lonely soul
Time, space, matter and energy in a vast universe
How much shall a passionate poet be allowed
To reveal his secret inner world to the audience?
To be a great poet, one needs both skills and passion
While skills can be accumulated over time
Passion can be hardly generated even with the best catalysis
So was a poet born to be poet or not?
In a rational business world full of commodities
In chasing time-to-market and maximizing shareholder values
How can aesthetic luxury like emotional poetry
Survive and even prosper in the 21st century?
From Gift Economy to Money Economy
From global warming to information explosion
Email, SMS, IM, Blog, Podcast and SNS are squeezing the territory of Newspapers, TV and radio
How can poetry attract netizens' eyeball in highly competitive Attention Economy?
There are rich playwrights
There are wealthy novelists
There are high-profile songwriters
Why cannot poet be a dedicated career nowadays?
Philosophy, culture, art, science and religion, soil of poetry
Drama, painting, music and fiction, nutrition of poetry
In the history of human civilization with so many national languages
How did poetry evolve to be the most profound aesthetic art independently?
Poetic Life (February 16, 2009) - 106
At A Night Before Christmas full of Raising Sand
Like one of those Sleepless Nights in the winter
On the Blue Side Of The Mountain
Near the Long Road Out Of Eden
Many Moons hanging Around The Campfire
The Inconvenient Truth Waiting In The Weeds
Killing The Blues by Dancing In The Light
Enjoying The New Crystal Silence Simply Grand
Here I Stand on Higher Ground East To West
With Ribbon In The Sky just Seven Steps To Heaven
Be The Dark Knight with Life Beyond Measure
Like Heroes Of Our Time singing That Lonesome Song
Master The Art Of Peace in The Scent Of Light
Enjoy The Ride Down In The Valley
Let The Wind Chase You Jingle All The Way
In Big Round World it is an Amazing Big Journey
Poet II (December 4, 2008) -78
A poet is a life observer
A poet is a day dreamer
A poet is a log keeper
A poet is a story teller
A great poet is a philosopher
A great poet is a photographer
A great poet is a psychologist
A great poet is a pianist
A great poet is a historian
A great poet is a traveler
A great poet is a gourmet
A great poet is a bartender
A great poet is a innovator
A great poet is a transformer
A great poet is a eliminator
A great poet is a creator
A great poet is a shaker
A great poet is a mover
A great poet is a learner
A great poet is a mentor
A great poet is a opportunity seeker
A great poet is a risk taker
A great poet is a pacemaker
A great poet is a peace lover
A great poet is a lonely thinker
A great poet is a cheerleader
A great poet has no forerunner
A great poet has no follower
What you sow is your passion
In the soil of technique
What you reap is inspiration
With the joy of satisfaction
Poetry is to release
Release yourself first
And then to release someone else
Poetry is to motivate
Motivate yourself first
And then to motivate someone else
Poetry is to entertain
Entertain yourself first
And then to entertain someone else
Poetry is to trust
Trust yourself first
And then to trust someone else
Be graphic
Be symbolic
Be romantic
Be realistic
Be idealistic
Be skeptic
Be classic
Be modern
Be dramatic
Be fantastic
Be a poet, be a great poet
No one ahead, no one behind
Poet I (December 2, 2008) - 77
Once a noble profession
Now only a part-time job
Once the focus of attention
Now you need a poet's corner
No great poet without pride
No great poet without sensibility
No great poet without passion
No great poet without inspiration
No great poet is rich
No great poet has power
No great poet can survive without love
No great poet can sustain without freedom
Weaver of language
Mixer of sound
Recorder of life
Recorder of love
Universe is your space
History is your time
Mankind is your family
Audience is your lover
No poet was born a poet
No great poet was born a great poet
Masterpiece is your offspring
Fame is your by-product
Be a cynic
Be a narcissist
Be a paranoid
Be yourself
Do not envy
Do not complain
Be a poet
Be a great poet

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-4 10:05:08 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

诗歌是诗人灵感流露,主要是聊以自慰的,能打动别人,那是更好。
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发表于 2010-9-4 10:02:37 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

慢慢喜欢上你的英文诗了!
   

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发表于 2010-9-4 10:09:17 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

赋诗吐心声!好诗人当有丰富经历,丰富情感,丰富思想,否则写不出激荡人心的诗篇~!
   

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发表于 2010-9-4 11:21:26 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

很佩服前沿老师的写作素养,这种任意挥洒英文的水平不是吹来的,要向您学习。
不过诗人一挥洒情思的时候可能忘了一些语法,这也是我们二语学习者必然遭遇的问题O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

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发表于 2010-9-4 11:24:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

[quote]跟我在科技界所见如出一辄!
Poet I (December 2, 2008) - 77
Once a noble profession
Now only a part-time job
Once the focus of attention
Now you need a poet's corner
No great poet without pride
No great poet without sensibility
No great poet without passion
No great poet without inspiration
No great poet is rich
No great poet has power
No great poet can survive without love
No great poet can sustain without freedom
Weaver of language
Mixer of sound
Recorder of life
Recorder of love
Universe is your space
History is your time
Mankind is your family
Audience is your lover
No poet was born a poet
No great poet was born a great poet
Masterpiece is your offspring
Fame is your by-product
Be a cynic
Be a narcissist
Be a paranoid
Be yourself
Do not envy
Do not complain
Be a poet
Be a great poet
hehe, you are a great poet!

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-4 11:24:57 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

世界上本无所谓语法,说的人多了,也就成了语法

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O(∩_∩)O哈哈~以讹传讹最现身的说法了  发表于 2010-9-4 11:28
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发表于 2010-9-4 11:52:58 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

就我个人而言,看不出阁下的英文诗有啥美感,还是标准的中文思维。

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-4 12:02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:01 编辑

本贴主题是:国内英语界砖家们写作水平之差令人汗颜!

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发表于 2010-9-4 12:02:39 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:02 编辑

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