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【英文诗歌】Future is just an imagination

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发表于 2010-9-28 17:14:31 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 03:56 编辑

Future is just an imagination
Growing in its expectation
But sometimes it vanishes like a bubble
And there’s no body could handle

Reality is just a thinking
With bitterly choices making
But sometimes it brings you delight
Falling flowers it’s just like

Past is just a lie
In forgetting it slowly die
But sometimes it becomes a devil
Like a skeleton always around you

Love is just alone
Two fleshes are just upon
With souls seeking around
For its freedom ground
But sometimes it burst out its desire
Like a thirsty traveller needs his pear

Poerty is just a rubbish
Full of thoughts’ garbage
It gives off terrible smell
But sometimes in lost you can’t tell
It deprives your spirit like poison
And can’t breathe without oxygen

And life is just life
Always a passenger in time
Like a man from young to old
Feel he’s lost too much gold

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发表于 2010-9-28 17:51:14 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 03:56 编辑

欣赏,学习。
Future is just an imagination
Growing in its expectation
But sometimes it vanishes like a bubble
And there's no body could handle  (And there's nobody who could handle)
Reality is just a thinking (thinking是不可数名词)
With bitterly choices making  (bitter choice-making)
But sometimes it brings you delight
Falling flowers it's just like (It's just like falling flowers)
Past is just a lie      (The past)
In forgetting it slowly die   (dies)
But sometimes it becomes a devil
Like a skeleton always around you
Love is just alone
Two fleshes are just upon  (upon what?)
With souls seeking around
For its freedom ground   (What do you mean?)
But sometimes it burst out its desire  (bursts)
Like a thirsty traveller needs his pear (in need of)
Poerty is just a rubbish (rubbish不可数名词)
Full of thoughts' garbage
It gives off terrible smell
But sometimes in lost you can't tell  (in lost, what do you mean?)
It deprives your spirit like poison
And can't breathe without oxygen
And life is just life
Always a passenger in time
Like a man from young to old
Feel he's lost too much gold (Feeling)

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发表于 2010-9-28 19:21:45 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 03:56 编辑

欢迎新朋友!写英文诗不易,问好!

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发表于 2010-9-30 12:27:43 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 03:56 编辑

语义通晓,好读好懂。

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发表于 2010-9-30 19:47:18 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 03:56 编辑

[quote]欣赏,学习。
Future is just an imagination
Growing in its expectation
But sometimes it vanishes lik ...
点评得当。提给楼主。

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发表于 2010-10-4 15:26:40 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 03:56 编辑

想起了水木年华的《未来的未来》

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