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【英文诗歌】Just my feeling,not you

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发表于 2010-10-5 20:54:41 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:53 编辑

If  I  die ,How many tears would you remain for me?
If  I'm  not  stronger , kill  me please!
If we can only encounter each other rather than stay with each other,
then I wish we had never encountered.
Although  I'm too sad and lonely,  I'll well live everyday until I never  have tears.
I don't know why I'm not enough good.
But I'll do it better.
Although you don't love me a little,
I'll still go on my way,but isn't you ,.
Just only myself.
So I must  lose something,
It's not you ,because you don't have qualifications
You dot't influence me from now.
So I must remember my lovers
my life will better with you
It's just not you!

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发表于 2010-10-5 21:18:48 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:53 编辑

问好新朋友@

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发表于 2010-10-6 18:19:43 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:53 编辑

问候 风染墨  朋友
欢迎欢迎

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发表于 2010-10-22 09:21:42 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:54 编辑

感觉还是不像诗歌啊,而是一些短句子的散文体组合

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