【英文小诗】 Insecure

Louisa · 发表于 2010-10-10 11:54:25

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Insecure
I take a cup of water
With smell of chlorine.
And drop the milky powder
With fear of melamine.
I peel an apple, fresh and sheen
And its rotten core is seen.
I breathe night air by window
With petrol odor.
And watch  a big splendid apple
Full of nervous people.

Louisa · 发表于 2010-10-10 11:57:45

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Some foods and services that are supposed to impove our life, acutally do harm to our health and environment.

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2010-10-10 12:05:43

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That's because China has such a population too big to be fed with proper food in time...I'm afraid. And by the way, land is also usurped to develop real estate for some people to get rich first as our paramount leader said...

Louisa · 发表于 2010-10-10 12:21:16

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Ture!
They get rich overnight, invest assets overseas, and now inhabitate as foreigners to avoid the punishment by public oneday.

童天鉴日 · 发表于 2010-10-10 12:49:33

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口感好爽的一首

宛城卧龙 · 发表于 2010-10-10 13:13:34

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这首英文诗的立意很好非常写实
中心在最后两行

And watch a big splendid apple
Full of nervous people.

引发读者思考

周道模 · 发表于 2010-10-11 20:05:59

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read and think about it.

Louisa · 发表于 2010-10-11 22:34:22

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口感好不了。那天我买了价格不菲的苹果，削了光亮的皮，切开了芯子是坏的，无法下口。

Louisa · 发表于 2010-10-11 22:49:04

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谢谢点评。
这样的小诗只是生活的一点感受的记录而已，没有什么深度。

Louisa · 发表于 2010-10-11 22:51:37

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没有什么好想的，越想越担忧。连正常饮食都要成问题了。

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