【古诗英译】李白 子夜吴歌：春歌

鱼龙舞

子夜吴歌 春歌
李白
秦地罗敷女，采桑绿水边。
素手青条上，红妆白日鲜。
蚕饥妾欲去，五马莫留连。
Midnight Ballads of the Four Seasons: Spring
Li Bai
The Adorable Luofu of yonder land,
Picks mulberry leaves by a water bank;
Through green twigs moves her white hand,
And in clear sunlight her rosy attire shines;
"My silkworms are hungry, I cannot tarry."
"And your five-horse dray shall no more stay."

"And your five-horse dray shall no more stay." 是“no more”好呢？还是“no longer”?

宛城卧龙

子夜吴歌 春歌
考虑
midnight song ——spring 我想这样翻译简洁

童天鉴日

我一直想说点什么，但是昨天隔时读过两边，都没找见破绽，也不忍心立马表扬，所以把机会留给楼下，拍砖或表彰