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【原创英诗】oh Spring

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发表于 2011-4-26 14:17:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-7 21:45 编辑

Oh spring
Like water you come out of the earth and flow to the sea
Like a cloud you pass across the sky and fly away to see
Like sunshine you warm the field and life grows to be
Like a flower you open the eyes and smile at me
Oh spring
You are the green grass and trees
You are the smiles on the children's face
You are the gentle wind and breeze
You are the old birds coming back to me
Oh spring
Like a fish you swim in the stream free
Like a sand you lie on the river bed deep
Like a smoke you disappear as a dream
Like a shadow you stand in the moonlight's beam
Oh spring
You are the language that never speak
You are the words that never creat
You are the beauty touches the wind's feet
And you are the true love that i forever need


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发表于 2011-4-28 10:30:57 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-7 21:45 编辑

Like a flower you write the poem!

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发表于 2011-4-30 13:58:22 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-7 21:45 编辑

nice job!

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发表于 2011-4-30 16:53:18 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-7 21:45 编辑

i  改为 大写I   

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