【汉英新诗】我是春天的病人

周道模 · 发表于 2011-6-29 16:23:27

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         我是春天的病人
               I am the Patient of Spring
多病的父亲去天上寻找上帝
      久病的母亲在地上残喘余生
我是苦病历史悠久的儿子
我是祖传秘方养育的病人
My sick father has gone to Heaven to seek God
My sick mother is still living for her rest life
I am the son of bitterness and sickness of history
I am the patient raised by traditional remedy

地球在晕忽忽地旋转
大地流着污浊的鼻涕
咳嗽我咳出红艳的春花
发烧我烧出红肿的霞云
The earth is rotating dizzily
The world is flowing runny nose
I am coughing the red and fresh Spring flowers
I'm having a fever and burning the rosy clouds

冬天把我转诊给春天
我是躺在春天怀里的病人
Winter transferred me to Spring to cure
I'm the patient lying in the arms of Spring

头痛我就枕着青草梦想星光
脚跛我仍搀扶母亲慢慢而行
我用雪水冲服阳光的药
我靠诗歌输液延续生命
Being headache and I'll lying on grass dreaming stars
Being lame and I'll still hand my mother walking slowly
I take the medicine of sunshine with snow water
I am continuing my life by infusing poetry

我是迷恋春天的病人啊
我病了也是四季的春心
I am the patient indulging in Spring
I'm ill but also the love of four seasons

2009-4-15 12：05 竹林

冰默樱娘 · 发表于 2011-6-29 20:37:37

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学习周先生好诗！很别致！

冰默樱娘 · 发表于 2011-6-29 20:57:30

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头痛我就枕着青草梦想星光
脚跛我仍搀扶母亲慢慢而行
while my head aches I'll lie on grass dreaming stars
though I'm lame I'll still hand mother walking slowly

周道模 · 发表于 2011-6-30 06:37:02

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头痛我就枕着青草梦想星光
脚跛我仍搀扶母亲慢慢而行
while my head aches I'll lie on grass dreaming sta ...[/quote]
谢谢樱娘的巧心指教！不过诗里面尽量少用从句。你的第二句的hand部分特好，简洁。接收了，谢谢！

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