【中诗英译】洒扫庭院（请斧正）

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洒扫庭院
文/王建民
  仍是深秋的早晨
  在北方久别的故乡
  灿烂的鸟鸣正把我叫醒
  告诉我：趁着黎明洒扫门庭
  我知道巨大的秋风在夜间来过
  一夜之间满院落叶堆积
  当我洒下第一瓢清水
  没有人看见我的内心
  只是在我举起扫帚的时候
  尘土和羽毛在我的身上做了一下停顿
  我紧了紧松动的手掌
  就像紧了紧松动的思想：
  哦，多年以后当我离开人世
  我希望我身后的名声
  一如我今晨洒扫的庭院
  清清洁洁，干干净净
Cleaning the Courtyard
--Written by Jianmin Wang    --Translated by He Yu
Still a deep autumn in the morning
After a long absence from home in the north
The brilliant twitters are waking me up
Telling me: Clean the courtyard before dawn
I know the strong autumn wind came in the night
Overnight leaves piled up in the courtyard
When I sprinkled the first gourd ladle of clean water
No one saw my heart
Only when I lifted up the broom
The dust and feather made a pause in my body
I tightened my loose palm
Just as tightened my loose thoughts:
Oh, years later when I'm gone
I hope the reputation after me
Just as the courtyard cleaned this morning
Tidy and clean

周道模

仍是深秋的早晨
在北方久别的故乡
Still a deep autumn in the morning
After a long absence from home in the north
试改：
Still in the morning of the deep autumn
In my long separated hometown in north

山海诗风

我紧了紧松动的手掌
  就像紧了紧松动的思想：
  哦，多年以后当我离开人世
  我希望我身后的名声
  一如我今晨洒扫的庭院
  清清洁洁，干干净净
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仍是深秋的早晨
在北方久别的故乡
Still a deep autumn in the morning
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出来趟远门，刚回来。感谢周先生百忙中临帖指导，敬茶！{:soso_e160:}

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我紧了紧松动的手掌
  就像紧了紧松动的思想：
  哦，多年以后当我离开人世
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谢谢山海临帖赏读～～这是朋友的乡土诗歌，试着译了，跟大家交流～～{:soso_e181:}

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欣赏，拜读！[/quote]
O(∩_∩)O谢谢！圣诞快乐！

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O(∩_∩)O谢谢卧龙先生~~圣诞快乐！{:soso_e160:}

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