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发表于 2012-2-24 16:05:53
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thank u for ur advice. I try to make the same syllables to remain the style of couplet as much as possible.
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发表于 2012-2-25 21:37:37
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卧龙先生好,草深藏静兔,水阔卧蛟龙。兔走龙游,龙年吉祥高照,静待岁月好。
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发表于 2012-2-27 08:01:40
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