【汉英双语】16、抒怀

无心剑

抒怀
Let Me Speak My Mind
为赋新词酒一杯，
思接千载似流水。
梦与古人舞蹁跹，
此生清贫终不悔。
To compose a new poem I drink a cup of wine,
My thoughts go through the ages like a stream.
Leading a life in honest poverty would feel fine,
If I could dance with ancient poets in my dream.
译于2009年1月3日。
I drink a cup of wine to compose a new song,
Like a river my mind goes thru the ages long.
I feel my life in honest poverty would gleam,
If I could dance with olden poets in my dream.
译于2012年3月2日。

秋韵冬缘

支持佳作！问好！

周道模

阅读，学习。第二译流畅些、音韵感就强了。

无心剑

阅读，学习。第二译流畅些、音韵感就强了。[/quote]
谢谢周兄赏读。最近重译考虑到音节整饬，一般是三音步、四音步、五音步或六音步，这首诗译文是六音步。