【双语诗歌】杜若曲

木樨黄谷 · 发表于 2012-8-19 13:18:58

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我住横塘东，I live by the east bank of Hengtang river
欢渔横塘西。You go fishing west of Hengtang river
日日见欢来，Everyday I could see you come and then go
中心唯凄凄。My heart would always be filled with sorrow
黄檗随日长，The corktree grows taller as the days slide
妾泪渐娑迷。and my tears swell to find nowhere to hide
若得一人心，If only i'd win the heart of my dear
白首不相离。I wouldn't leave him till my hairs turn white sheer.
（Even old，to him i would always keep near）
（I‘ll be always with him year after year）

周道模 · 发表于 2012-8-19 16:37:49

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英语押韵如古诗。学习。

木樨黄谷 · 发表于 2012-8-19 21:52:12

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英语押韵如古诗。学习。[/quote]
请周老师多多指教。我不大满意最后一句的翻译

冰默樱娘 · 发表于 2012-8-20 12:23:15

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欣赏木樨弟弟精彩译文！最后一句可否：I wouldn't leave him untill we have white hair

木樨黄谷 · 发表于 2012-8-20 12:29:54

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欣赏木樨弟弟精彩译文！最后一句可否：I wouldn't leave him untill we have white hair ...[/quote]
呵呵，可以啊，也想用来着，虽然假韵非完全韵，也算韵哈

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