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《I want to go around the world》 |
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发表于 2013-2-15 08:54:38
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This is my first poem, which was written in college, many grammer mistakes.Thank you for your kindly review.
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发表于 2013-2-16 19:46:07
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English first ,then Chinese ,.Thank you for your comment.
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发表于 2013-2-19 10:51:49
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Where is your edition?
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