习作：试译华兹华斯《Untitled 》之二

先锋的影子

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What heavenly smiles!O Lady mine,
Through my very heart they shine;
And,if my brow gives back their light,
Do thou look gladly on the sight;
As the clear Moon with modest pride
Behords her own bright beams
Reflected from the mountain's side
And from the headlong streams
无题
我的姑娘，你圣洁的笑靥，
将我的心房照却；
若我的眉目投影一瞥光芒，
邀君欣愉地凝望；
若皎月冰洁，恬静淡泊。
俯览身撒的清辉
点亮人间的峰峦谷坡
点亮潺湲的溪水。
    浅评：这应该是一首情诗，音韵和谐、情深意切，让人陶醉。

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