[原创]感受天安门城楼

亦然

<p align="center" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="黑体" color="#ff0033" size="5">赏读《感受天安门城楼》</font></span></strong><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4">亦<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span>然<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">一头扎进《中诗》散文版面，不期与玉书先生的《感受天安门城楼》蒙面撞击，好一个“感受”天安门城楼，让诸多感慨，交集汇涌，清新之风，扑面迩来。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">一种如临其境的现场感。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">文笔从十一自然入笔，撩起关于天安门城楼的美好而遥远的记忆。他这记忆同样撞开了我的先后两次登上天安门城楼的往事。我想：同样的站在金水桥沐浴毛主席的慈祥目光，同样的举步上城楼，抬眼望广场，同样的文人情怀，莫铭感动，可是物是人非，时随境迁，为何亦然就没有留下只文片字，纪念和感怀中国这个伟大的心脏，政治旋涡，世界政坛风云的所在。这是我的愚钝，也是我的畏怯——因为，把笔墨泼洒在这个地方的作家诗人不胜枚举，而要写出新异，难也！而“凝望那黄瓦的红墙，龙楼风阁，画栋雕梁”，综观玉书先生的作品，实在愧煞！他引领我们跨越时空的隧道，挺胸抬头，昂首阔步，作一次感觉漫游，放一次艺术风筝，牧一次思想之羊！<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">一种诸多写作方法的艺术感。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">文章全面利用描写，叙述，铺陈，议论，抒情等诸多手法，围绕“感受”，各有侧重，而又共同晖映，各有章法，而又形成合力。从宫殿建筑的庄严雄伟，金碧辉煌的写实方法到历史文明的演变沉浮的铺陈手段，从结构的典雅威严的描写到东方巨龙腾然而起的展望议论的夹序夹议，全篇以抽丝剥茧，层层深入的结构，感慨酬和着这“荟萃古今风韵，占尽天下豪华”的泱泱大国的首府所在！<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">一种爱国情结和民族自豪感。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">全文置身在历史与现实，过去和未来，局部和整体，悲哀和欣慰，升降与沉浮，刻骨铭心地“感受”着体味着历史的，现实的，过去的，未来的沧桑风雨，辉煌神奇，在历史的关照中，立足城楼，胸怀天下，连续使用“站在城楼上”，铺陈升华“感受”。确实，作者和读者都心神共鸣地感受到了“国旗在上升，和平在上升，希望在上升，一种民族自豪感油然而生”的浓郁的爱国情结。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">全文围绕“感受”，运用“感受”，表达“感受”，虚实结合，行散神凝，全部集中反映到这种现场感，生发感，展望感。“我们买了一枚镀金的天安门纪念章，我把她小心翼翼的带在心上，”“回忆巍峨高耸的天安门城楼，一种特有的感受溢满心扉”，“拍下了天安门的美景，连同我们激动而豪迈的心情也拍摄进去。”这些似乎是随意之笔，但是，确实妙趣横生，画龙点睛。最后，作者生花之笔轻轻落下：“天安门城楼，你留给我们的不只是庄严雄伟的印象，而是世界上任何东西也无法取代的民族自豪！”<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">上述寥寥，亦然重点推出，抛砖引玉之嫌颇重，但愿大家雅俗共赏，仁智垂青，刮目厚看玉书之作！<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;"><font size="4"><font color="#2b2bd5">是为评。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-18 16:32:55编辑过]

张玉书

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#e66b1a"><font size="6"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">人海茫茫</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">知音何在</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">?</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">远在天涯</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">近在眼前</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">不是一个影子</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">而是一颗诚心</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">遥寄一串远方的思念</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">写满我的心情</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">愿您每一刻的时光</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">都被欣喜紧紧地包围</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">想您时不一定告诉您</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">假若不告诉您</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">您也会自然会意</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">那我们就有了真正的心灵碰撞</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">那我们就有了诚挚的交流</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">亲爱的朋友!</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><p></p></font></span></font></p><p></p><font color="#e61ae6">谢谢点评!我用一首短诗表谢意!问好!</font>

亦然

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>张玉书</i>在2007-3-18 16:17:00的发言：</b><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#e66b1a"><font size="6"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">人海茫茫</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">知音何在</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">?</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">远在天涯</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">近在眼前</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">不是一个影子</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">而是一颗诚心</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">遥寄一串远方的思念</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">写满我的心情</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">愿您每一刻的时光</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">都被欣喜紧紧地包围</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">想您时不一定告诉您</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">假若不告诉您</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">您也会自然会意</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">那我们就有了真正的心灵碰撞</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">那我们就有了诚挚的交流</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">亲爱的朋友!</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><p></p></font></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><font color="#e61ae6">谢谢点评!我用一首短诗表谢意!问好!</font></div><p></p>知己，相识何必曾相见！为诗歌精神，为文学旗帜，我们一起携手！<br/>握在中国诗歌！

张玉书

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>亦然</i>在2007-3-18 16:36:00的发言：</b><br/><p></p>知己，相识何必曾相见！为诗歌精神，为文学旗帜，我们一起携手！<br/>握在中国诗歌！</div><p></p><font color="#e6bd1a" size="5">好!把我们的手握在中国诗歌吧!</font>

行天

问好老友，远握！

张玉书

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>行天</i>在2007-3-18 18:40:00的发言：</b><br/>问好老友，远握！</div><p></p>谢谢您的问好!握手!

富可达

看看精华作品,感受优美文字.....

张玉书

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>富可达</i>在2007-4-25 17:20:00的发言：</b><br/>看看精华作品,感受优美文字.....</div><p></p>谢谢!握手!

富可达

我也去过北京,但写不出这样深情的感受,值得欣赏的好文!

张玉书

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>富可达</i>在2007-5-22 14:50:00的发言：</b><br/>我也去过北京,但写不出这样深情的感受,值得欣赏的好文!</div><p>您什么时候去的?写点回忆性的文章吧!我期待着.......问好!</p>