<h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt 18pt; tab-stops: list 36.0pt;"><font color="#f70938"><strong><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="5"><strong>●《白诗歌的隐秘敌人》</strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p><font size="4"></font></p></span></strong></font></h1><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt 18pt; tab-stops: list 36.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font size="4"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">熊平</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><font size="4"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><br/> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">我不是诗歌爱好者,也很少读诗,但对诗总是很关注。我这样的懒人,想了解一个时代的特点,又想省事,最简单的办法就是读这个时代的诗歌文本。因此我时不时会在网上某个诗坛悠转</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">,</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">看诗人们相互掐架,吐口水,脱裤子,给我的生活平添很多乐趣,乐此不疲。有次在坛子上看见某个诗人说:我要是再看到沈浩波念他那自以为是的诗,我非拧断他的脖子</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">!</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">当时我就乐开了:新诗有救了</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">!<br/><br/> </span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">每每这时,我就觉得自己仿佛是站在云端,看底下山头林立,各大小山神纷纷祭出大旗,周围一群喽罗在那里舞枪弄棒,花拳绣腿,喊打喊杀。特别是所谓的“盘峰论剑”之后,各大山头已阵营明晰:陕有他们,川有非非,上有撒娇,京有下半身,莉花体,垃圾派……等等,几百个山头,全是人头涌涌,杀声震天。再抬眼看个究竟,原来在我身边不远处,也有一座小山,若隐若现,质朴如磐石,绰约若处子,有一旗挑出,上书曰:白诗歌。不禁心中窃喜:这些年老在外眺望风景,云游四方,哪知身边有此等好山,就此按落云头,登门造访。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">白诗歌此山虽小,且无山神,却也人丁兴旺,知善好客,诗意浓浓,我等不会写诗之人,只要不怀恶意,也不会被排斥。记得有一天,不知啥时跑到了徐江的山头,没有敬神,就凑了句热闹,结果被徐江一句“到一边恶心去”掀翻在地,才始知江湖险恶。第一次遭人唾骂,本想回敬几句,一想到这斯居然还有《自由》,且斜视,从不正眼看人,便哈哈一笑,扭头就走。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">长话短说,且说白诗歌,近年来我是早有耳闻,说起来还有一段经历。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">四年前我在一大排档吃快餐,桌边是一本破旧不堪的书,手一翻,是一本没有封面的《佛山文艺》,里面有一组橡皮诗,写得不算好,也不差,我一下子被它口水的写作方式吸引,猛的就想起了阿橹,就想起了《阿橹之死》,想起阿橹杀人之后,差不多十年没有读到一首脍炙人口的好诗了。那个心情啊,悲哀啊,回家一上电脑,就又搜索北岛的诗,心情复杂地看北岛和食指的近况,以及他们最新的诗作。直到后来偶然读到了大草的《白菜顶着雪》。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">《白菜顶着雪》</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">大草</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font size="4"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我给北京房山的朋友</font></span><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 去了电话</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 问他冬天的情况</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 他说屋里生了火</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 很暖和</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 我就想起新年要到了</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 这个年末</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 我应该做点什么</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 我想带上她</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 去房山住几天</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 她会问</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 去做什么</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 我说牵着你的手</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 在雪地里走</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 然后拍拍你身上的雪</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 指着地里的白菜</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 说多好啊</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 暖暖的冬阳下</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 白菜顶着雪</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">可以说,作为白诗歌的典范作品,大草的《白菜顶着雪》曾经使我从疯狂寻找阿橹的偏执中解救出来。在顾城,海子,阿橹死了之后,我还能读到如此明亮的诗句,是我的幸运,也是新诗的幸运。我发现,要读到好的诗歌文本,我不用再去找北岛,食指和欧阳江河,非非,韩东他们了,在朦胧诗和第三代之后,新诗终于出现了。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">当然,大草的《白菜顶着雪》并不能作为新诗的标致性文本,至多只能作为杨黎提出废话写作之后新诗的一个果实。下半身是,垃圾派是,撒娇是,白诗歌也是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">.</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">即使是于坚,梁小斌,欧阳江河,韩东,和杨黎他自己,作为第三代诗人,他们从来都未走出朦胧诗的影子。现在,在这个巨大而不可破的阴影下,有些诗和诗人尝试走出</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">,</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">露出了一点山头。从诗言的对象,主观与客观,诗的词语</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">,</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">写作方式与写作手法,解构,等等,诗的方方面面,第三代后的年轻诗人们,在第三代的带领下,各立山头,对朦胧诗展开了猛烈的攻击,并相互掐架,征战地盘,血流成河。所以有时候我站在云端看了就笑了。并不是我比这些诗人们高明,而是身为局外人,我容易看得更清楚些。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">当然,白诗歌这山头,除了大草,我还看到了宋晓贤的《一生》。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">《一生》<br/></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">宋晓贤</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p><font size="4"></font></p></span></h1><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt 18pt; tab-stops: list 36.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排着队出生,我行二,不被重视</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排队上学堂,我六岁,不受欢迎</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排队买米饭,看见打人</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排队上完厕所,然后</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">按次序就寝,唉</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">学生时代我就经历了多少事情</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">那一年我病重,医院不让进</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我睡在走廊里常常被噩梦惊醒</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">泪水排着队走过黑夜</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">后来恋爱了,恋人们</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">在江边站成一溜儿</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排队等住房、排队领结婚证</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">在墙角久久地等啊等</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">日子排着队溜过去</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">就像你穿旧的一条条小花衣裙</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我的一生啊,我这样</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">迷失在队伍的烟尘里</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">还有所有的侮辱</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排着队去受骗</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">被歹徒排队强奸</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">还没等明白过来</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">头发排着队白了</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">皱纹像波浪追赶着</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">喃喃着有一天,所有的欢乐与悲伤</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">排着队去远方</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">读宋晓贤的《一生》,读第一段,我就想起了读欧阳江河的《傍晚穿过广场》。欧阳江河以诡秘著称,他读诗,可以阐释性阅读,一段平淡无奇的北岛的新诗句,他可以读出词语背后的环境,意义,象征和隐喻,让我不得不佩服。所以有时候我更愿意把第三代称作朦胧后。随着铿锵有力的语言节奏,一开始就给一首诗定调,并给人无限的已知的想象,是这两首诗共同的特点。就象我们平时看电视连续剧的大结局,明知结局的出现,却偏要看,看是不是这样结局,与主人公一起悲喜交加。所不同的是,宋晓贤的《一生》,是他自己的一生,也是同时代同命运的人的一生;欧阳江河的《傍晚穿过广场》,则是纪念了那用一生穿过广场的人,是一个时代的特殊印记。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">有时候我就想,要找一首反映时代的诗,或者说在我们这个床上极端自由而床下不太自由的年代,我们是否还需要“黑夜给了我黑色的眼睛</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">\</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">我却用它来寻找光明”这样的诗句?我们的时代已经棱角多变,我们抗争的方法与方式是否也应该随之多变?作为新诗的最隐秘的敌人,朦胧诗是否应该就此寿终正寝?</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">在白诗歌山上,我还读到了花间的《鸭舌帽》</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">《鸭舌帽》</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p><font size="4"></font></p></span></h1><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt 18pt; tab-stops: list 36.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">花间</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">电视正在直播</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">有个通缉要犯</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">估计午夜</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">潜入深圳</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我下楼买可乐</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">有人戴鸭舌帽</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">低头,擦肩而过</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我突然想起一个人</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">名叫张子善</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我差点喊出声</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">那个叫张子善的朋友</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">我们十年没见了</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">读花间的《鸭舌帽》就感觉象读韩东的《有关大雁塔》。用北岛的话说,就是诗越来越成为一种大脑游戏,与心灵无关。当然,北岛的话,是说给诗以外的人听的,诗真的与心灵无关吗?那么,他,韩东,也不会自立山头搞什么“他们”。我在网上查到,韩东是搞西方哲学的,在大学里教的却是马列,那个痛苦啊,我知。虽然我不教马列。这种物质与精神的分裂,他韩东要一个肉身来装两个对立的东西,必须要有释放的渠道,所以他搞起了“他们”,他写了《有关大雁塔》。他是想在充分享受物质的同时,在精神的台阶上开一朵小红花。《鸭舌帽》终于轻松了,人就是物质的,现实的,何必要喊出声呢?十年,这又是多大的距离呀。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">关于白诗歌,我还选了一个文本,就是宋世安的《汇款的农民工》。去年我有个写古诗词的老乡,自办了个网站发诗。新诗就叫我做板猪,后来他拉来小宋,小宋就在上面发诗,我看了他的诗,就提了些意见,叫他做板猪,我做看客,因为去年实在忙得象只狗。有一天晚上他就贴了他刚写好的四首诗,其中一首就叫着《汇款的农民工》,我眼前一亮。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">《汇款的农民工》</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p><font size="4"></font></p></span></h1><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt 18pt; tab-stops: list 36.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">宋世安</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">你一定刚从地盘下班,裤筒沾满黄泥巴</font></span><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">我安分守己站在米线之外,不像一个坏人</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> </span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">你贴身捏出五张崭新的百元大钞,神情莫名紧张</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">我试图看看纸币是否滚烫,却遭受你怀疑的目光</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> </span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">你谨慎。你把钱数了又数。你没有放弃对任何陌生人的防范</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">我有点犹豫。我故作镇定转移目光。我后退几步让你安心</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> </span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">你重新核对了地址。一次两次,钱不到家不放心</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">要是自己是邮递员,或者把自己一起邮回家……</span></font><font size="4"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">那该多好。你想得美滋滋,才稍稍把我忘却</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">当时我就回贴说,这个诗好,好好改一改吧。我不知道他真是当天写当天贴,后来个别地方改了一下,回贴说哪个刊物要发这首诗了,我也很高兴,觉得小宋是很有诗歌天赋的人,长写下去定能出成果。当时我就想起了下半身诗人南人的《吃冰棍的女人》,两首诗有异曲同工之妙,都是对一个个瞬间的画面把握得如此之精湛,给平淡的语词赋予跳跃的活力,让人重归对语言的敬畏。只是,南人《吃冰棍的女人》拘泥于诗言对象,在对诗的精神解构上,比小宋的《汇款的农民工》,少了些对时代解剖后剖面的深度。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">《汇款的农民工》与《吃冰棍的女人》也反映了下半身与白诗歌的相同与不同之处。然而沈浩波在发现下半身诗言对象的先天不足之后,把性又提到了政治的高度,以床上的自由来对抗床下的不自由,写了很多发人深省的好诗。垃圾派的徐乡愁似乎缺泛沈浩波的内省,继续革诗歌精神的命。但革诗歌精神的命,并不是放弃诗歌的精神,对诗歌所追求的精神解构完全缴枪投械,或以不合作的姿态,以崇低来反对崇高。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">显然,在面对新诗歌的隐秘敌人时,白诗歌并没有抛弃诗歌得以延续的内核:</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">诗歌精神。我们常说,世界上有两种动物,一种是痛苦的人,一种是幸福的猪。但对一个诗人来讲,他只能是痛苦的人。所以海子死了,顾城死了,食指疯了,北岛流亡了。朦胧诗这个敌人在离去的时候,决不能带走诗歌的精神遗产,这也正是欧阳江河,周伦佑,韩东,杨黎等第三代诗人的抗争所在,虽然第三代尚未走出敌人的阴影,作为第三代后的一支,白诗歌没有理由放弃前辈的抗争。在与朦胧诗这个隐秘的敌人抗争的过程中,白诗歌很好地吸取了第三代抗争的经验,这使得我们的诗歌具有延续性。在朦胧诗割断诗歌的脐带后,白诗歌从传统诗歌找到了与敌人抗争的武器。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">这种武器就是要维护传统诗歌的质朴面孔,回归对语言的敬畏,回归汉语的音,质,与调,依据我们的客观,续写诗歌的精神。猎户星诗软件不可能写出白诗歌,白诗歌诗人也不需要结巴,只会打回车键,脱裤子。白诗歌需要对客观世界的瞬间感受,通过对汉语词语的内化,把它拟成诗歌的本来精神而得以持续下去。就象“暖暖的冬阳下</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">\</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">白菜顶着雪”,就象“日子排着队溜过去”,就象“我差点喊出声”,就象“</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> </span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">你想得美滋滋,才稍稍把我忘却”,与“非非”和“他们”不同的是,白诗歌“介入”,但合作,“旁观”,也干涉。也就是说,与“非非”的不与体制合作相比,白诗歌也与体制抗争;与“他们”的旁观和远离相比,白诗歌对体制的抗争来得更直接。为了说得更明白些,我从四个方面来说明白诗歌的特质。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">诗言对象</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">:</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">从空镜到特写。空镜曾是朦胧诗最犀利的武器,朦胧诗也因此借此武器打遍天下,并且一统江山。但当这种九阴真经被普通大众所掌握后,就开始泛滥成灾,成为最遭人病诟的把柄。现在,除非真正的诗坛高手,对空镜这种尖端武器把玩,才能玩出点新意。大众对朦胧诗的审美疲劳,空镜是第一宗罪。空镜由于它的广义性,不确定性和飘忽性,曾使我们越挣扎味道越浓,但也曾使我们找不到北。所以回归“当下”,“在场”等,在第三代诗人口中呼之即出,并付出实践,第三代诗人的确功不可没。回归当下,诗人在场之后,还应当注重诗人的瞬间把握,即特写。对瞬间的把握往往反映一个诗人的功底,没有平时的细心观察,介入,体验,要把瞬间化为永恒根本不可能。所以我看到现在诗坛帮派林立,除了各帮帮主早磨练出一付火眼金睛之外,一帮小喽罗以为写诗不用空手道了,就鸡毛蒜皮的事往里面堆,实在是难以入目,结果是每个帮派上都是垃圾成山,臭不可闻,想淘出一首好诗出来都难。我要对这些小喽罗说,其实你们被老大耍了。要想成为诗人,哪能不注重平时练心练眼,深思苦想?换句话说,这特写,比那空镜还难</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">!</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">特写好了,是诗眼,特写歪了,是诗屁眼!白诗歌的特写,其实也是对传统的回归,象什么“昔我往矣,杨柳依依”,先人早跟我们做好特写典范了。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">诗言方式:从书面到口语。一听说诗可以口语化写作了,煞是惊喜了一帮不学无术的文学小混,前一段时间居然还搞起了梨花体,成立了梨花教,跳将出个国家级诗人出来。不可否定,赵丽华的诗歌天赋,确可称得上国家级诗人,但赵丽华的结巴诗,她只能写一次,写第二次,她就弱智了。你还学,就傻逼了。口语并不等于口水。我前面提到橡皮诗曾给我耳目一新的感觉,但后来为什么一哄而散了?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">口语口水化了,不散行吗。白诗歌主张诗歌口语化,是主张诗歌向下,回归日常生活,回归人民,回归大自然,亲吻大地。所以在这里还是要感谢第三代,他们所说的“日常”,“客观”,“废话写作”,“诗到语言止”,都是白诗歌的营养。我在白诗歌山上,也看到了其它山上一样看到的口水。说句心里话,真的要写出好诗,口水要多吞进去,要做到惜字如金,也就是第三代所说的恢复对词语的敬畏。诗到语言止,并不是说你对语言可以不尊重。所谓文无第一,武无第二。我常在诗坛看骂战,看掐架,看他把别人骂得狗血淋头,骂人和掐架水平之高,弄得我还对他有少许敬畏,结果他把自个的诗往上一贴,我就直摇头:哪能这样亵渎我那神圣的汉语啊。我一向眼高手低,之所以从不写诗,就是心存对汉语的敬畏。书面并不能装裱高贵,口语也不能廉价,白诗歌拒绝矫饰,也拒绝廉价。口语写作不是降低诗歌的门槛,也不能成为网络投机会子狂欢的理由。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">诗言精神:从窄门到宽门。顾城杀妻再自杀后。有人写纪念文章。讲到顾城的痛苦。为顾城开脱说</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">:</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">当灵魂无法超越时。对肉体的毁灭就成为必然</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">/</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">我当时就心一惊。但转念一想也是,朦胧诗在诗歌精神的窄门里这么多年,也算是达到了极至,不自杀还能干什么?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">也许流亡和发疯可以保得肉体平安,但灵魂的苦楚谁又知?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">一位流亡北美的诗人,发出了《北岛,是我们白痴</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">!</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">跟中国做爱,不如自己手淫》的呼唤。步入精神的窄门,步入抗争的窄门,那还真不如自己手淫。所以诗言的精神,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> </span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">势必从窄门走向宽门,才能豁然开朗。如何从窄门走向宽门?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">象“非非”那样不合作吗?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">还是象“他们”那样旁观和远离</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">不是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">,</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">都不是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">.</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">所谓退一步海阔天空。形式上退一步</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">,</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">精神上却前进了一大步。不用正面强攻,绕道就可以发现宽门。去年余华接受采访时说,《兄弟》是他余华第一次从命运的窄门进行正面强攻,说自己写到李光头刚才监狱出来,抬头看天,写到这样普通的句子,泪就出来了。我当时看了就笑,我还泪就出来了呢。走什么窄门?光明大道不是尚开着吗?等了你十年,还吊着大伙的味口搞什么上下册分开出,哪有一点《许三观卖血记》,《活着》的张力</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">看《兄弟》泪流满面,我还不如随手拈看一期《知音》杂志什么孝儿十年么么泪流满面来得快呢。从宽门到窄门,余华走进了死胡同。从窄门到宽门,诗得到新生。如果我们一开始写诗或未开始写诗之前,就想着要揭示什么时代,灵魂,情感,抗争,良心之类,除了无病呻吟,还能怎么</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">但如今,诗坛上大哭小号的,自怜自哀的,神经质的,愤青的,野心的,红眼的,搞的是诗人的地位一落千丈,斯文扫地,臭不可闻。结果那天报纸报道诗人当众脱衣服了,做爱了,我也没有惊奇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">:</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">诗坛这样下去,不脱衣服行吗?宽门是什么?宽门是介入,是妥协,是参与,是干涉,是在场,是表态,是求证,是赞美,是追问,是抗争……。前阵子我看到有学院老教授批评下半身和垃圾派,一身文革打扮,姬指气使,硬是把这帮年轻有才的诗人往窄门逼,为此还有十几个诗人在哈尔滨搞了个什么天问诗歌公约。你天问去吧,白诗歌走的是宽门,不问生殖器,也不问排泄物,白诗歌问的是地,是人,是自然。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">从窄门走向宽门,有白诗歌,有“他们”,有新乡土,有新抒性,有下半身,有莽汉,有撒娇,有垃圾派,他们都是找到了宽门中的某一门或某几门。至于“非非”和“知识分子写作”,则还在窄门面前徘徊。曾有一段时间,周伦佑以“红色写作”,欧阳江河以“中年写作”,以为找到了开启窄门的钥匙,结果不是走入死胡同就是犬儒病发作。好在今年“非非”那帮人又分别出发了,希望他们能找到通往诗歌精神的宽门。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><font size="4"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">诗言技巧:从西方到传统。新诗降临的第一天,就带着西方的烙印。直至第二代朦胧诗人,在彻底割断新诗的脐带之后,把西方的技巧发挥到极致,造就了一个遮天蔽日的诗坛盛景。近年来,国外诗人批评家批评北岛的近作没有中国本土特色,认为北岛的诗作翻译成英文,德文,与一个美国诗人,德国诗人的作品无异。潜意识,象征,通感,隐喻,解构等西方诗歌技巧在我们古诗中也有体现,但不是主流特质,中国古诗多用赋,比,兴手法,把平淡的句子,写得情意浓浓或坚硬有力。“巧笑倩兮,美目盼兮”,跃然纸上。“山平水远苍茫外,地辟天开指顾中”,气冲宵汉。我们又何必舍弃家宝而抱他人大腿</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">韩东指责西川,王家新为西方诗词的买办,是有一定道理的。其实我本人也是受西方哲学影响极深之人,特别是法兰克福学派,但我要治哲学,我决不会仿照萨特的《词语》写作。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">50</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">60</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">年代的人,谁没有受过西方哲学的影响</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">?</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">就连我这</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">70</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">后的人,也中毒西方哲学颇深,朦胧诗在</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">80,90</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">年代大行其道也不足为怪了。从西方学来技巧后,朦胧诗达到了诗坛的顶峰。但当技巧遭遇电脑,口水遭遇网络,一场诗坛的网络智力游戏大比拼和诗坛流氓的狂欢就理所当然到来了。诗人满天飞,而且写的诗还那么朦胧那么梨花,连小学生都可以用猎户星诗歌软件写诗了。猎户星诗作软件作者公开在网上叫嚣,让所谓的诗人滚开,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">60</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">秒,我也能成为国家级诗人</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;">!</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">写诗机把诗人赶下神坛,把诗歌和诗人娱乐化,诗人要求被富婆包养的新闻也出来了。这就是技巧,技巧惹的祸。现代技巧是可以编程,但传统的手法,却很难用一套标准去描述。白诗歌并不反对技巧。没有技巧,那哪来阅读的快感?白诗歌反对的是对技巧的滥用,以及技巧的矫饰,人为的升华。诗歌本是人口语相传的东西,到了现代,经过西方技巧的矫饰与升华,忽然就星巴克,高人一等了。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><br/><br/><font size="4"> </font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">说了这么多,关于白诗歌的定义,可能还没有说清楚,留着下次再说吧。要不,说完了,我下次说什么。但如果你真要我用一句话来概括白诗歌的定义,我只能说:白诗歌是一种回归传统的诗。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; 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