桃花泪

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初春凉月桃花泪

曲径飞蝶柳絮魂

小庙千年无故事

山村今日有游人

Tears Of The Peach Blossoms

In the early spring

the cold moon

tears of the peach blossoms

On the winding path

the flying butterflies

souls of the willow catkins

The small temple

in one thousand years

without any story

The mountain village today

there are the tourists

7/30/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯

Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai

第6591首對聯體詩The 6,591th Two Pairs of Couplets

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casper 发表于 2018-7-31 19:35
初春凉月桃花泪曲径飞蝶柳絮魂  ( 飞碟生初春 ? 柳絮或尚可 )小庙千年无故事  ( 千年仍无故事 ? 不可思议 ) ...

谢谢casper诗友，等一下修改。现去洗澡了。

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修改如下

桃花泪

初春凉月桃花泪
曲径飞蝶柳絮魂
小庙经年无故事
山村今日有游人


Tears Of The Peach Blossoms

In the early spring
the cold moon
tears of the peach blossoms
On the winding path
the flying butterflies
souls of the willow catkins

The small temple
for several years
without any story
The mountain village today
there are the tourists

7/30/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6591首對聯體詩
The 6,591th Two Pairs of Couplets

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casper 发表于 2018-7-31 19:35
初春凉月桃花泪曲径飞蝶柳絮魂  ( 飞碟生初春 ? 柳絮或尚可 )小庙千年无故事  ( 千年仍无故事 ? 不可思议 ) ...

这样子修改，可好？

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casper 发表于 2018-7-31 21:58
But let's have others' say, otherwise

Thank you!