A Piece of Thoughts on Mountain Jing-gang

张马沙

The grass is flourishing, forest dense, and fountain luxuriant
Sheltered the weak cat and fostered it to become a mighty tiger
If without the firewood provided by the low multitude
How could the sparkle have become prairie fire?
Slender cogon grass-roots can consolidate a dam
Tender water drops are able to penetrate a hard slate
Jiang Jie-shi didn’t understand how to attract common people
So he was defeated by Mao Ze-dong who was once well-known as the bandits’ head
附中文原作（注：中、英文版本皆为鄙人原创作品）
游井冈有感
2007年五一长假，与花都九三社友同游圣地井冈山。
草茂林密甘泉滋
蔽养猫狸成虎师
若无百姓拾薪柴
哪得星火燎原时？
茅根细细能固堤
水滴柔柔可穿石
介石不谙亲黎民
输给“匪”首毛润之

宛城卧龙

先来问好先生
晚上 过来认真看

firefly

The grass is flourishing, forest dense, and fountain luxuriant
Sheltered the weak cat and fostered it to become a mighty tiger
If without the firewood provided by the low multitude   if 可以去掉吧
How could the sparkle have become prairie fire?    become --》start
Slender cogon grass-roots can consolidate a dam  
Water drops are able to penetrate a hard slate  柔柔未译
Jiang Jie-shi didn’t understand how to attract common people   非正式有用kiss people的 attract比get close to精悍
So he was defeated by Mao Ze-dong who was once well-known as the bandits’ head  ----he was 可以去掉 有用ringleader evil/ boss /bandit chief的
附中文原作（注：中、英文版本皆为鄙人原创作品）
游井冈有感
2007年五一长假，与花都九三社友同游圣地井冈山。
草茂林密甘泉滋
蔽养猫狸成虎师
若无百姓拾薪柴
哪得星火燎原时？
茅根细细能固堤
水滴柔柔可穿石
介石不谙亲黎民
输给“匪”首毛润之

张马沙

多谢评点。增译了“柔柔”；if与后面的how could配合，虚拟语气更明显；星火后来已经燎原，所以用have become比较好……
kiss people 虽更简洁，但不符合国情风俗；匪首还是用bandits' head较好。