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新时代 新诗歌 | 冬箫诗选║总第3期

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发表于 2019-3-14 10:27:52 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 宛城卧龙 于 2019-3-18 17:28 编辑



  主持人:王磊 张俊锋

   




冬 箫 诗 选
Selected Poems of DONG Xiao




任诚刚 英译
Translated by REN Chenggang




雪中的石头


它挨冻,是因为内心的火没有燃起来
它像一尊修行的佛
一动不动

我看着,也一动不动
试图找到它该有的眉目、嘴唇和耳垂
或者内心包藏中的偈语
我也想像过,为什么那么多人从它身旁走过
而没有一个去理会

它一定有一个不为人知的秘密
多少年的席地而坐
似在等一个人
近距离开始一场纯白的交流?

我当然不是那人,我这样近距离地
看着它
仅仅是一个刀客平静之后的又一副面孔

Stone in the Snow

It feels cold because the fire inside has not been lit up
Like a practicing Buddha, it is
motionless

I gaze at it, in silence,
Trying to find the eyebrows, lips and earlobes it
should have or a Buddhist chant or hymn hidden in its heart
I also wondered why so many people passed it
but not a single person paid attention to it

It must harbor a secret nobody knows
Sitting on the ground for years
It seems to be waiting for someone
To start a clean white conversation up close?

Of course I'm not that person, I’m just so close looking at it
Who is, after a knife-slayer's calmness, another face

石像

被鬼斧砍伐
被时间研磨,之后
石头可以说话了

不过,我听不懂
只从石缝里的青苔
辩识出,它来自于江南
一个有着绸缎的地方

而它,没有衣着华丽
只有曾经被泥土遗弃的那张土脸
质朴、粗陋、有纵深的皱纹。像一个老农
缺少一件挡雨的蓑衣
一顶可以遮阳的草帽

它不曾淬火,但真正的火焰
对着我
只是,整个身子还陷在寺庙的影子里
让我慢慢逼近

The Stone Statue

After being cut by a ghost’s axe
And ground by time
The stone is able to speak

Yet I don’t understand
Only from the moss in the stone cracks
I can identify that it is from the Southern Land
The home of silk and satins

But it has no fancy dress on
Only the muddy face ever abandoned by dirt
Rough with deep wrinkles, simple and unadorned,
Like an old farmer
Who lacks a palm-bark rain cape
And a straw hat to shade the sun

It has never been quenched, but the real flame
Toward me gushes out of a hose
Yet its whole body is stuck in the shadow of the temple
So I am able to gradually get close

刹车

睡了,刹车的尖锐还在延续
我的身子还在向前

整个世界的黑还在扑面而来
各种怪异还在扑面而来

还有风,一个巨大容器
装着所有,扑面而来

我伏在地面上,被压得很扁
任由它们潜伏或者生长,甚至

在我体内形成新的伤疤
这一切,刹车显然毫无效果

Brake

I've fallen into sleep, yet the brake is still shrieking
My body still moving forward

The dark of the whole world
And all sorts of oddities still flooding toward my face

And the wind, a huge container,
Filled with everything, still flooding toward my face

I'm lying on the ground, squashed flat
Leaving them lurking or growing, even

Forming a new scar inside me
For all that, the braking is obviously useless


雪地里的落叶

一片树叶躺在雪地上
显得那么空旷
周围,没有一点和它相近的东西
哪怕是一样腐朽的黑色

它躺着,像一具尸体
更像一个被世界遗弃的句点
终生不了也终死不了

但它必须躺着,陪着纯洁
也必须继续黑着,为了一尘不染的洁白
它甚至

必须不断显得渺小、猥琐、可怜
最终让白覆盖了它
成为一枚表面光鲜的落叶

A Fallen Leaf in the Snow

A leaf is lying on the snow
It seems so empty and vast
Around, there is nothing similar to it
Even the same rotten black color

Like a corpse it is lying
More like a period abandoned by the world
It can't make a living, nor can it make a dying

But it has to lie there, in company with purity
It has to remain black as well, for the spotless pure white
It even

Has to constantly appear trivial, wretched, and pathetic
Finally it watches the white cover its face
And becomes a leaf with a fresh and fair surface

心里有颗不断拧紧的螺丝

凌晨,听到一个铁哥们
死了!!
我的心拧了一下
想想昨天还在通话,约面
那声音……,又拧一下
想小时候游戏,她是我的小夫人

心拧得更紧了!
再想想那次分离。想想几十年
全无生息,才有了联系
心,就不断不断地拧着
就像一颗螺丝,把左心房和右心房
拧在一起,分不清左右

My Heart Keeps Tightening Like a Screw

Early in the morning, I heard one of my buddies
Died!
My heart tightened
Just yesterday we were chatting on the phone, and making a date
Thinking of her voice... my heart tightens again
When we played games in childhood, she was my little lady

Thinking of this, my heart screws even tighter!
Then I think of that separation: for decades
We had heard nothing from each before just getting in touch
My heart keeps tightening
Just like a screw that wrings the left atrium and the right into one
making me unable to tell the left from the right


作者简介



  冬箫,本名邱东晓。中国作家协会会员,中国诗歌学会理事。曾获第四届徐志摩诗歌奖, 2007年度中国诗潮奖, 2011年中国网络十佳诗人,《现代青年》2016年度十佳诗人,中国诗歌万里行优秀诗人奖等荣誉。已先后在《上海文学》《北京文学》《诗刊》《星星》《长江文艺》等刊发表诗作千余首,入选《年度诗歌精选》、《年度最佳诗歌选》等多类权威诗歌年度选本。著有诗集《江南的湿度》《江南的墨记》等。

About the  Author

      Dong Xiao, his real name is Qiu Dongxiao. Member of Chinese Writers Association; Member of Chinese Poetry Society. He was awarded the 4th Xu Zhimo Poetry Prize; China Poetic Trend Award of 2007; China Network Top 10 Poets of 2011, Modern Youth Top 10 Poets of 2016, Outstanding Poet Award in Ten Thousand Miles of Tour of China Poetry, and other honors. He has published more than one thousand poems in magazines as Shanghai Literature, Beijing Literature, Poetry, Stars, and Yangtse Literature and Art, etc., and has been selected in many kinds of authoritative versions of poems of the year, as the Annual Anthology of the Specially Chosen Poems; the Annual Anthology of the Best Poems. He is also the author of the collection of poems: the Humidity in Southern Yangtze and the Poems, Calligraphy or Painting in Southern Yangtze Region, etc.

译者简介


   任诚刚,云南农业大学外语学院英语教授;云南大学滇池学院客座教授。主要从事MTI硕士研究生文学翻译及英语专业翻译理论与实践课程教学。系中华(全国)诗词学会会员、云南省翻译工作者协会理事。入选中国当代诗词精品大系:《中华当代绝句精选》(1998)、《中华当代律诗精选》(1999)、及《中华当代词综》(2000);被收录2000年美国海外艺术家协会《世界名人錄》(新世纪卷)(世界人物出版社、中国国际交流出版社. 香港);《国际文化艺术人才大典》(亚太文化出版社. 2000年. 香港)。编著书籍:《旅美吟稿》(专著、1999)、《英汉诗歌鉴赏比较与互译》(2013)、译著《汉英对照韵译天安门诗抄一百首》(2016)等。

About the translator

      Ren Chenggang, a professor of English, College of Foreign Languages, Yunnan Agricultural University; Guest professor of Dianchi College, Yunnan University; who is mainly engaged in the teaching of translation theory and practice for MTI students, and is a member of China Poetry Society and a council member of Yunnan Translators Association. His works include in the Contemporary Chinese Poetry: Jueju (quatrains) (1998), Lvshi (Octet) (1999), and Ci (Lyrics) (2000); Literature achievement includes in “Who's Who in the World” (New Century Vol.); “World Talent Dictionary in Art and Literature” (Asia Pacific Culture Press. 2000. Hong Kong). He is the author of books: Autographic Poetry in America (1999); Comparative Appreciation and Inter-translation of Selected English and Chinese Poems (2013), and Chinese-English Translation of 100 Poems of Tian An Men (Rhymed Ver. 2016), etc.


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 楼主| 发表于 2019-3-16 19:16:47 | 显示全部楼层
第三期制作完成,感谢任教授操刀英译
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发表于 2019-3-16 21:04:38 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
恭喜崭新第三期!
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发表于 2019-3-17 12:06:38 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2019-3-17 21:51:04 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2019-3-17 22:51:26 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 吴一 于 2019-3-17 22:59 编辑

前二首够水准,后三首逊色了一些。为何?就不卖弄了。弱弱地问一下,冬箫兄能否把前二首单独复制发我消息箱收藏?我愚蠢,不会操作复制粘贴的功能,要不,也不好意思劳动大驾了。
另外,如有知心朋友经过,也请帮忙完成我收藏的心愿。
在此,一并感谢!

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哈哈,谢谢吴一,也谢谢小雪人。看到晚了  发表于 2019-3-21 08:43
等总编是没指望了!小雪人给你复制吧!呵呵!  发表于 2019-3-17 23:05
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发表于 2019-3-17 23:10:59 | 显示全部楼层
吴一 发表于 2019-3-17 22:51
前二首够水准,后三首逊色了一些。为何?就不卖弄了。弱弱地问一下,冬箫兄能否把前二首单独 ...

谢谢小雪人,你这个知心朋友没白交!!!
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发表于 2019-3-18 12:46:30 | 显示全部楼层
   提读,学习。
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