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On Earthquake (No. FF016)

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发表于 2008-6-20 22:03:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:22 编辑

The earthquake, having happened in Sichuan, was a great event in China this year. More than 60 thousand people died and numerous common people hurt. The losses brought by the earthquake was immeasurable at all. However, thousands of kind people, from the famous to the unknown, noble to humble, showed great concern about everything that happened in Sichuan every day. Not only this, they also spontaneously collected donations to distribute them to the epicenter on time. Meanwhile, in the charge of the government, many supplies, soldiers and doctors were orderly sent to earthquake areas. Soon after the shock our Prime Minister, Hu Jintao, flied to visit hard hit earthquake regions and encouraged all the people there, which moved all the nation. Even the media abroad thought highly of our efficiency and reaction  to the tragedy.
In addition, some problems such as jerry-built projects emerged during this disaster, which remained to be solved.

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-20 22:07:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

明天6级考试
今天受将赴战场的同学所托
写了这篇东东
交差后顺便上传到这里
呵呵 大家多批批

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发表于 2008-6-21 06:17:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

The eartrhquake, having happened ..., was a great .....
hurt   hurt  hurt,  no  hurted.
losses
about everything that happened......
jurry-built?
that's not  your style to  make so many mistakes  this  time.

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发表于 2008-6-21 08:44:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

今年中考我就猜要考地震的,果然考了。

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发表于 2008-6-21 14:30:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

问好兄弟
几天没来了

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-22 00:07:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复: On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑
原帖由 海外逸士 于 2008-6-21 6:17:00 发表
The eartrhquake, having happened ..., was a great .....
hurt   hurt  hurt,  no  hurted.
losses
about everything that happened......
jurry-built?
that's not  your style to  make so many ......

Sorry, Sir, I shouldn't be irresponsible for scratching off such an article
Jrry-built here means 偷工减料的, if it is not the most usage, how to put it then?

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-22 00:13:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

问好白沙和龙龙

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-22 00:28:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复: On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑
原帖由 海外逸士 于 2008-6-21 6:17:00 发表
The eartrhquake, having happened ..., was a great .....
hurt   hurt  hurt,  no  hurted.
losses
about everything that happened......
jurry-built?
that's not  your style to  make so many ......

Soon after uploading this essay
I realized some ridiculous mistakes I'd made
But I was not available to correct them then
Fortunately they were found by Mr. Oversea later
Somehow, now I take the criticism attracted by Mr. Oversea
As an implicative compliment. hehe

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发表于 2008-6-23 00:52:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

you mean  jerry-built,  not jurry-built.

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发表于 2008-7-7 08:15:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复:On Earthquake (No. FF016)

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:23 编辑

learned,thanks!

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