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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-8 11:14:57 | 显示全部楼层
吴长青 发表于 2019-6-7 18:50
点赞欣赏!端午节安康!

谢长青赏帖。节日愉快!
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-8 12:31:35 | 显示全部楼层

谢雅赞。祝夏安!
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发表于 2019-6-8 13:13:18 | 显示全部楼层
悬蒿弄黍龙舟竞,风吟趁闹前旌。菱花莲叶也多情。缕丝牵五彩,荔子宴良朋。
青波东流山水远,浴兰曾慰玄卿。从来天问厄时英。渔歌起汨水,榴火照心明。
应时佳作,意蕴耐品!
问好何先生!
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-8 15:42:21 | 显示全部楼层
寺寺 发表于 2019-6-7 23:12
轻灵和婉,情景交融,意味隽永,别具风情。。。

多谢寺版嘉评。遥祝夏安。
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-8 17:16:55 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 何威廉 于 2019-6-8 17:18 编辑
亦鸿 发表于 2019-6-8 13:13
悬蒿弄黍龙舟竞,风吟趁闹前旌。菱花莲叶也多情。缕丝牵五彩,荔子宴良朋。
青波东流山水远,浴兰曾慰玄卿 ...

感谢亦版悉心点评。假期愉快!
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-9 09:28:16 | 显示全部楼层
寒水烈冰 发表于 2019-6-8 09:13
青波东流山水远,浴兰曾慰玄卿。从来天问厄时英。渔歌起汨水,榴火照心明。
蕴含厚重,寄概遥深。问好何先 ...

感谢寒版摘句鼓励。顺颂时绥!
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-9 15:15:56 | 显示全部楼层
青波东流山水远,浴兰曾慰玄卿。

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-10 15:38:45 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 何威廉 于 2019-6-25 12:42 编辑

Tune: Immortal at the River

Dragon Boat Festival

In orchid season boats wave with unsinkable oars,
The wind is still in the air with low moans.
May water caltrop and lotus leaf coquettish proud.
Five-color new silk is twining angle,
Lychee seems to be a hospitable host.

Others may smirch their fragrance and bright hues,
Than the scintillating point of your hour.
In twilight glowed the clouds with unfathomable sheen.
Ondine is smitten with Syracuse once more,
While the passionate pomegranates burst.


临江仙

端午

悬蒿弄黍龙舟竞,
风吟趁闹前旌。
菱花莲叶也多情。
缕丝牵五彩,
荔子宴良朋。

青波东流山水远,
浴兰曾慰玄卿。
从来天问厄时英。
渔歌起汨水,
榴火照心明。


Note:

"Ondine":Ondine is a 2009 Irish romantic drama film directed and written by Neil Jordan and starring Colin Farrell and Alicja Bachleda. Ondine is a lyrical modern fairy tale that tells the story of Syracuse (Colin Farrell), an Irish fisherman whose life is transformed when he catches a beautiful and mysterious woman (Alicja Bachleda) in his nets. She says her name is Ondine, which means "she came from the sea". His daughter Annie (Alison Barry) comes to believe that the woman is a selkie, a magical seal/woman creature, while Syracuse falls helplessly in love. In the Celtic myth, a selkie is able to become human by taking off her seal coat, and can return to seal form by putting it back on.

"Your hour": Qu Yuan was a Chinese poet and politician who lived during the Warring States period. He is known for his patriotism and contributions to classical poetry and verses, especially through the poems of the Chu Ci anthology: a volume of poems attributed to or considered to be inspired by his verse writing. Together with the Shi Jing, the Chu Ci is one of the two greatest collections of ancient Chinese verse. He is also remembered in connection to the supposed origin of the Dragon Boat Festival.


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发表于 2019-6-10 20:37:57 | 显示全部楼层
渔歌起汨水,
榴火照心明。
提赏嘉制,尤感结句以景表情,蕴藉耐品。
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-6-12 17:54:41 | 显示全部楼层
易千里 发表于 2019-6-10 20:37
渔歌起汨水,
榴火照心明。
提赏嘉制,尤感结句以景表情,蕴藉耐品。

谢易版高评鼓励。遥祝夏安!
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