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Sand-Sifting Waves Song "Color of Night on the Indian Ocean"

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发表于 2020-2-28 16:45:06 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 何威廉 于 2020-3-12 14:35 编辑

Tune: Sand-Sifting Waves Song

Color of Night on the Indian Ocean

By William He

Pellucid gleam,
Rising within depths of being,
Folding wind and swell.
Under a star burning sky,
Soma hides behind color of night,
The illuminating and visionary beam.
Artemis' Chariot casts its luminescent rays on.
In the salt chuckle of rocks,
All mortal beings only a drop.
As the riddle of the Sphinx,
Aldabra which the waves draw back,
A wilderness with shattered mirrors well nigh.

The whale blows.
Ebb and Eddie of tidy current,
Lasureous billows are surging,
Great Classics gone into the watery maze.
It is a melancholy sound of veena,
And the abyssal benthos coming,
Near colonnades of coral reef.
Lemuria is steeped in legend,
Not even a Cape-comarin breath in the dark.
On the glistening surface,
A myth of creation is painting,
Transience and brilliant vibrance now.
In the strangest isle lively,
The Crown starts to indulge himself,
Listening to the tune of bells of pearl.
Whispering the Dodo in the morning,
He portages across Selene at night,
Who takes leave of merman rolling in the deep.


浪淘沙漫

印度洋夜曲

作者:何威廉

澈映、
眩连天一色,
风音浪雪。
三星引曳,
更兼苏摩,
骏逸羚捷。
嗟纤阿月御云飘拂。
俯尘间、
亘古须臾。
问海客、
潮声千里,
跌宕层波茫惚。

鲸斡。
润滋波涛,
宛蜒深谷,
利莫里亚珠宫。
横笛琉琴曲,
巧缀鲛人近,
卧蚕山阙。
步拾瀛洲,
尽望蓝桥只缘溟渤。
借清辉,
心随水涨,
天河夜来明灭。
怡然时,
穆满觞瑶岛,
对朱阑薜荔。
朝辞渡渡鸟,
江妃夕会,
梦回鱼龙别。



Note:
"Soma" : In Hindu mythology, Soma represents the god of the Moon. He is depicted riding through the sky in a chariot drawn by white horses. Soma was also the name of the elixir of immortality that only the gods can drink.
"Artemis' Chariot": Artemis' Chariot also known as the Moon Chariot, is made of silver and pulled by four golden reindeer. Before Artemis became goddess of the moon, the Titaness Selene owned the moon chariot, which she drove across the sky at night.
"Sphinx" : A Sphinx was a mythical monster, which had the head of a human and the body of a lion. The Riddle of the Sphinx is probably the most famous riddle from antiquity. It has its origins in a familiar story from Greek literature, in particular the Theban trilogy by Sophocles. Sphinxes also appeared in Egyptian mythology; the two cultures had tight links and had considerably influenced each other.
"Eddie" : Eddie (1996). Whoopi Goldberg plays Eddie, a New York City limo driver and Knicks superfan. After having the opportunity to assistant coach the team, the owner fires the head coach and gives the position to Eddie, who plans to lead the team to victory.
"Lemuria": One of the oldest surviving civilizations.Lemuria was apparently the only continent where modern man dwelt half a million years ago.During the Pre-Cataclysmic Age (from about 100,000 until the Great Cataclysm), Lemuria remained one of the great continents of its era, and was ruled mostly by the Deviants and their human slaves.
"Cape-comarin" : Rocky headland on the Indian Ocean in Tamil Nadu state, southeastern India, forming the southernmost point of the subcontinent. It is the southern tip of the Cardamom Hills, an extension of the Western Ghats range along the west coast of India.
"Dodo": An extinct flightless bird of Mauritius (an island of the Indian Ocean), one of the three species that constituted the family Raphidae, usually placed with pigeons in the order Columbiformes but sometimes separated as an order.
"Selene": Selene was the Titan goddess of the moon. She was depicted as a woman riding sidesaddle on a horse or driving a chariot drawn by a pair of winged steeds. Her lunar sphere or crescent was either a crown set upon her head or the fold of a raised, shining cloak.


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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-1 11:51:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 何威廉 于 2020-3-1 14:10 编辑

As the riddle of the Sphinx,
Aldabra which the waves draw back,
A wilderness with shattered mirrors well nigh......








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发表于 2020-3-4 00:43:26 | 显示全部楼层
鲸斡。
润滋波涛,
宛蜒深谷,
利莫里亚珠宫。
横笛琉琴曲,
巧缀鲛人近,
卧蚕山阙。
步拾瀛洲,
尽望蓝桥只缘溟渤。
借清辉,
心随水涨,
天河夜来明灭。
怡然时,
穆满觞瑶岛,
对朱阑薜荔。
朝辞渡渡鸟,
江妃夕会,
梦回鱼龙别。
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发表于 2020-3-4 00:47:30 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏大作,文笔雄劲,词韵华彩,印度洋行,诗意浪漫。问好何老师!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-7 11:49:18 | 显示全部楼层
再次感谢英国上议院终身贵族托斯科特勋爵精心点评拙词《浪淘沙漫• 印度洋夜曲》英文本并在英国圈内传阅。

何先生:
大作在毛里求斯神秘海洋和月光的美妙旋律中,达到了崇高的艺术境界---我们多年以前来过这里,这是给我们留下了难以磨灭印象的胜地之一。正像您词中所吟咏的,这里是一个文化大熔炉,不同的种族和宗教彼此融合,相得益彰。我也许还没有完全把握您词的注释中所引用的古希腊神话的寓意。我理解,您是用了希腊月亮女神塞勒涅的圆缺意象等?
您笔下著名的渡渡鸟更值得一提。它既是毛里求斯的一种象征,也是人类必须记取的一个教训。这种鸟在16世纪被人类发现后,几百年之内就彻底绝灭了。现在人们越来越意识到保护环境和濒危物种刻不容缓---例如大熊猫和中国一些地方的老虎(西伯利亚虎或者中国东北虎是最重要的野生保护动物之一)。
......
最诚挚的问候!
托斯科特勋爵
2020年3月6日

托斯科特勋爵是牛津大学哲学博士,英国上议院终身贵族,英国政府前负责能源事务的国务部长,现任英国议会俄罗斯和独联体关系委员会主席。托斯科特勋爵同时也是英国著名作家。

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-9 12:38:28 | 显示全部楼层
AiHai-何海 发表于 2020-3-4 00:47
欣赏大作,文笔雄劲,词韵华彩,印度洋行,诗意浪漫。问好何老师!

谢何大诗人高评鼓励。迟复为歉,遥祝安康!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-9 21:15:25 | 显示全部楼层
齐天乐 印度洋舟中
作者:汪精卫
海波浮簸山如动,孤舟已悬天半。云幕周遮,星铓摇漾,月黑冷燐零乱。狂澜正卷,怎海若频翻,鱼龙未厌。梦入空濛,射潮强弩倩谁挽?
关河此时日远。镇无言徙倚,清泪如霰。万里波涛,百年身世,一样苍茫无畔。幡然意涣,羡浴羽鱼闲,眠窝燕懒。蓦地忧来,奈何空自唤。

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-12 11:13:47 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 何威廉 于 2020-3-12 12:22 编辑

Soma hides behind color of night,
The illuminating and visionary beam.
Artemis' Chariot casts its luminescent rays on......


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发表于 2020-3-14 08:58:38 | 显示全部楼层
问海客、潮声千里,跌宕层波茫惚。
此调以特定地点、景象烘托作者独特的感怀。层层铺叙、意境开阔,叙事抒情、不露痕迹,笔曲意深、含蓄味永,字斟句酌、震撼心灵!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-20 14:04:29 | 显示全部楼层
马丁梦曲 发表于 2020-3-14 08:58
问海客、潮声千里,跌宕层波茫惚。
此调以特定地点、景象烘托作者独特的感怀。层层铺叙、意境开阔,叙事抒 ...

马丁老师总是褒奖有加。感谢拨冗指点,威廉获益匪浅,如沐春风。
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