cradle of light

青衫来客

      I rushed to your heart with hot love
　　I left your world with rainy tear
　　Dancing roses stopped short in eve
　　The last sun ray I beheld was dear
　　
      The Eastern Star winked in the veiled sky
　　And called my flesh to hug the soft night
　　Where the murky void echoed lullaby
　　My soul was crying for the craddle of light
　　



人物头条【刀尔登：儒家导致中国最有智力的人，在两千年里不务正业
　　



　　

青衫来客

自娱自乐兄，may I ask you to put my peom in English if you are willing to do it.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-3-27 17:14:00 发表
自娱自乐兄，may I ask you to put my peom in English if you are willing to do it.

Are you serious? :P
Yours is already in English, my dear blue-blouse.

青衫来客

I am so sorry sir. In Chinese, not in English. Please forgive me for my boldness to make this awkward request.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-3-27 17:12:00 发表
    craddle of light      I rushed to your heart with hot love
　　I left your world with rainy tear
　　Dancing roses stopped short in eve
　　The last sun ray I beheld was dear
　　
      The Eastern Star winked in the veiled sky
　　And called my flesh to hug the soft night
　　Where the murky void echoed lullaby
　　My soul was crying for the craddle of light
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craddle ----是不是多了个'd'?

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-3-27 18:47:00 发表
I am so sorry sir. In Chinese, not in English. Please forgive me for my boldness to make this awkward request.

hehehe, dear Mr. blue-blouse, do you think we should stand on ceremony? hehehe

青衫来客

craddle ----是不是多了个'd'?
Yes, you are right. But I am sure one ' d ' more would make the cradle larger and safer.

嘉木子

          光的摇篮
我捎着炙热的爱，闯进你的心坎；
我发觉你的世界里，下起了暴雨。
舞蹈的玫瑰，在这短暂的前夕止步；
我看见了那逝去的柔和的太阳光线。
在这隐晦的夜空里，启明星眨着眼——
渴望我的肉体，拥抱这酥软的夜晚。
在这里，回荡朦胧的幽虚的摇篮曲
——那是我的灵魂在为光的摇篮呐喊！
不知道翻译得好不好，姑且试一试，还请各位多指正哦:v:

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-3-28 15:29:00 发表
craddle ----是不是多了个'd'?
Yes, you are right. But I am sure one ' d ' more would make the cradle larger and safer.  

hahaha, yeah, you are absoultely right, hehehe, and furthermore, you surely have robust sense of humour. :P

自娱自乐

青衫君，一事请教。
love - eve, rhyme with each other? 眼韵好像也不对？