【中英日三语】冉瑞峡译《此情可待》

冉瑞峡

世界经典歌曲《Righ here waiting 》日本語版『あなたを待ってるよ 』（中文版：此情可待）
词曲：Richard Marx （理查德·马克斯）
译配：冉瑞峡

海原を隔てて
われらはあえず
たまに電話くれても
憂さが晴れない
別居に耐えてこそ
永遠に愛し合う
いつまでも いずこでも
深くあなたを愛してる
どんなこと あっても
ずっとあなたを待ってるよ

笑い声 聞こえた
ぼろぼろ涙
目の前に出てくれた
でも近寄れぬ
今の俺を
知りたくないの
ベビーあなた 恋しくて
俺がおかしくなってるよ
どうすれば このロマンスは
生き残れるのか
でも最終的に
あなたと
一緒ならチャンスを
取るわ

今の俺を
知りたくないの
ベビーあなた 恋しくて
俺がおかしくなってるよ
どうすれば このロマンスは
生き残れるのか

（中文版）
越过重洋 天各一方
何时能再聚一堂
尽管偶尔你电话来访
终究难祛我惆怅
都说能忍受分居
是考验真爱时光
无论到何时 无论在何地
我都会一直深爱着你
无论世界上发生任何事
我都会一直等候着你

甜蜜笑声 回响耳边
我的泪盈满双眼
你的笑脸浮现眼前
触手抚摸又不见
你是否想象过
如今远方的我
宝贝亲爱的 日夜思念你
近乎疯癫不认识自己
如何才能让咱俩的浪漫
甜甜蜜蜜地直到永远
哪怕到最后那一天
与你相伴
我一定决不会放弃
这份情缘

你是否想象过
如今远方的我
宝贝亲爱的 日夜思念你
近乎疯癫不认识自己
如何才能让咱俩的浪漫
甜甜蜜蜜地直到永远

（原文）
Oceans apart day after day
And slowly go insane
I hear your voice on the line
But it doesn’t stop the pain
If I see you next to never
How can we say forever
Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here
Waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here
Waiting for you

I took for granted all the times
That I thought would last somehow
I hear the laughter
I taste the tears
But I can’t get near you now
Oh can't you see it baby
You've got me going crazy
Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here
Waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here
Waiting for you
I wonder how we can survive
This romance
But in the end if I’m with you
I’ll take the chance

Oh can't you see it baby
You’ve got me going crazy
Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here
Waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here
Waiting for you

2024.03.26.

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Oceans apart day after day
And slowly go insane
I hear your voice on the line
But it doesn’t stop the pain
If I see you next to never
How can we say forever
Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here
Waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here
Waiting for you

I took for granted all the times
That I thought would last somehow
I hear the laughter
I taste the tears
But I can’t get near you now
Oh can't you see it baby
You've got me going crazy
Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here
Waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here
Waiting for you
I wonder how we can survive
This romance
But in the end if I’m with you
I’ll take the chance

Oh can't you see it baby
You’ve got me going crazy
Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here
Waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here
Waiting for you



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一改英文：

Oceans apart day after day
And slowly go insane


为：

Apart, and day after day,
Oceans go insane slowly,


何不正确且押韵？