《春 日》- 秦 观 (C-E)

青衫来客

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-6-29 19:12:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 嘉木子 于 2009-6-29 11:33:00 发表
自娱兄 nestling 能表达 无力 二字啊
无力 是不是 指蔷薇的 纤柔啊

nestling 不表示‘无力’表示‘卧’
对‘无力’两字我也倍感头疼，想用‘delicate, slender, tender‘ 都觉得不够味，最后硬了硬头皮，咬了咬牙，一闭眼，不管三七二十一，就 [/quote]
What about fragile? It means as weak as water. I believe this is the right word to be taekn.

青衫来客

Going through this piece of work by my buddy,  I have nothing to say but wonderfully--done. It is a masterpiese indeed.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-29 20:26:00 发表
What about fragile? It means as weak as water. I believe this is the right word to be taekn.

Yep, that is it! :v: Great! :strong: Thanks for your input!:share:

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-29 20:29:00 发表
Going through this piece of work by my buddy,  I have nothing to say but wonderfully--done. It is a masterpiese indeed.  

呵呵呵，好话听起来总是悦耳的，呵呵呵，不过俺认为你是否有点言过其实了？呵呵呵
如果一词不太达意的话，那就会坏了整个译文。 俺这是举轻若重了。:P

海外逸士

how about  threads of rain?

how about  reflecting the sunlight?  when sun rises, it is not dawn any more.  

how about listless roses?  

自娱自乐

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2009-6-30 6:57:00 发表
how about  threads of rain?

how about  reflecting the sunlight?  when sun rises, it is not dawn any more.  

how about listless roses?   

Good suggestion, and actually I had thought about it, but decided to use strings. (I was going to say "strings of raindrops", but thought it could be way too
much to deviate from the original)

Ok, change to twilight? yep, reflecting seems much better than glistening or glistering to mean 浮.

as for listless, no, I don't think so, do you think it is fit in terms of its context?

Anyway, thanks very much for your input as always!

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嘉木子

delicate 用可不可以的

自娱自乐

原帖由 嘉木子 于 2009-7-2 10:35:00 发表
delicate 用可不可以的

可以，但读起来好像不太顺，你觉得呢？
fragile and delicate are synonyms anyway.