A Poem for Fun (11)

海外逸士 · 发表于 2014-5-12 00:40:49

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There is a small mill,
Stands on a clear rill,
At the foot of a hill;
To run it needs a skill.
I have a great will,
I want to fulfill:
To put a dinosaur on grill,
With a beer to swill.
I have a stomach to fill.
I am in great thrill,
With my voice so shrill,
Sharp like tip of a quill.
Almost let beer spill.
I have to hold it still,
And lay it on the sill.
Then I am taken ill,
Feeling really chill,
And must take a pill.
So I can't go to drill
To have free time kill.

天路客 · 发表于 2014-6-22 20:47:32

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-7 14:58 编辑

To put a dinosaur on grill？！！！好强大

天路客 · 发表于 2014-6-22 20:49:05

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-7 14:58 编辑

请教海外老师，从语法上说，To have free time kill的kill为什么不是killed

海外逸士 · 发表于 2014-6-22 21:20:02

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-7 14:58 编辑

killed is not the rhyme. poetry has exceptions.
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天路客 · 发表于 2014-6-23 10:30:27

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-7 14:58 编辑

you said it, sir

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