[原创](宋)王安石詩“梅花”英譯

海外逸士

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;">梅花</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-tab-count: 2;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span></font></font><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;">(</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;">宋</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;">)</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;">王安石<br/><br/></span></font></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman">牆角數枝梅﹐</font></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman">凌寒獨自開。</font></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman">遙知不是雪﹐</font></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman">為有暗香來。<br/></font></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US;"><p><br/></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">Plum Blossoms <br/></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3"><br/>By Wang Anshi</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">At a wall corner some plum trees grow;</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">Alone against cold white blossoms blow.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">Aloof one knows they aren't the snow,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">As faint through air soft fragrances flow.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"></p><p></p></span></p><p><br/></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">Plum Blossoms <br/></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3"><br/>By Wang Anshi</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">At a wall corner some plum trees grow;</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">Alone against cold white blossoms blow.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">Aloof one knows they aren't the snow,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3">As faint through air soft fragrances flow.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-font-family: MingLiU;"><font size="3"><p></p></font></span><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><font size="3"></font></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-17 22:36:18编辑过]

童天鉴日

一韵到底，很工整，却不太符合英文诗的套路<br/>谢谢楼主的翻译力作，仍然很欣赏，收藏了学习

海外逸士

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;"><font face="Times New Roman">這是按照古典英詩格式譯的﹐用的是</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">IAMBUS</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;"><font face="Times New Roman">﹐還有</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">ALLITERATION</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;">。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: MingLiU; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: MingLiU; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font face="Times New Roman">本詩在國內時已刊登在雜誌上了。</font></span>

白沙

好啊，如今有海外逸士先生，论坛的翻译诗更丰富了。感谢！

firefly

请教老师
blossoms blow
有这种表达吗
As faint through air soft fragrances flow.
倒装前是不是这样
As through air soft fragrances flow faint.
对应暗香 有了soft为什么还要faint？
fragrance 在表达一种香气时也是用复数吗