like clouds spreading out on your paper,
brewing an afternoon
some silent time is still messed by falling rain
you say you would like the embarrassed with known warm
common days will bloom under the pen
you sit in the sun of afternoon
seeing oblique light shadow
that Shoots from the big glass Windows
tiny cool coffee and my greetings being there
all starts with smile freely
the taper wind passes through the cold last night
lying on the windonwsill
drying all wet
the days are happy, even the poem is also bright
openning heart to sing in the light
like standing on the clouds, splendid
like the flying bird feather ,openning the vast sky
the voice is soft and sweet
（翻译：鲁侠客）
三、赏析
这是一首画面感很强的诗歌，云端、午后、光影、微凉的咖啡、窗台。
云端开始，云端结束，诗人动用了丰富的联想，展开了对于时光
度过寒冷的夜后，诗句飞翔形象化的叙事。这种看似游离人间烟火的
诗歌，其实有着很强的隐喻和象征意义。对于这种对话式的叙事诗歌
读者可以理解为爱情的一波三折，也可理解为生活的酸甜苦辣，雨过天晴
好的诗歌需要叙事语言的多义性支撑，当然诗歌的品读也涉及到审美要素
的互动性，有了不错的诗歌艺术手法，读者的生活阅历，审美感悟力就是
再创造了，因此一首好的诗歌需要诗人，会聆听的读者才能产生美好的
互动
（赏析：鲁侠客）
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