罗书球《朴素的九月》/童天鉴日

童天鉴日

翻译/童天鉴日
Severe September
by Luo Shuqiu
January,February,……and then September comes
I want to build an orchard here
The unsteady fences
Climb on the red leaves of another hill
The dog craftsman provides in the parterre
Gazes at the sky of September
Which was written by its tail at the door of orchard
He swaggers
And brokes my bumper harvest confidence in mind
I have to start uproot mud again
And reinforce lonesome which likes ground
朴素的九月
诗/罗书球
数着，数着，又来到了九月
我要在此打造一座果园
那些没有扎稳的篱笆
偷偷爬进了隔山的红叶
花圃里匠人养的那条狗
在果园的门口注目了一把
尾巴上写满了九月的天空
他大摇大摆地
踏碎了我志在丰收的把握
我只好重新锄土
补上如土的寂寞

童天鉴日

罗永德

祝贺。

张玉书

问好两位!新年快乐!

罗书球

真是辛苦兄弟，感动！

海外逸士

Plain September
Count month after month, and September again
I want to build an orchard here
With those unstable fences
Furtively climb into the red leaves beyong the hill
The dog kept by the worker at the flowerbeds
is gazing at the gate of the orchard
(can't go on as the Chinese meaning is not clear)

弦意

这样的交流好，欣赏！

安城

欣赏并祝贺！！

童天鉴日

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2008-1-14 1:03:00 发表
Plain September
Count month after month, and September again
I want to build an orchard here
With those unstable fences
Furtively climb into the red leaves beyong the hill
The dog kept by the w......

Thank you very much.

张玉书

提读并握手！