Men's Vexation

张马沙

Men's   vexation is  stronger than women's
The pole attempts to thrust into the half sky
The male organ has its nature drive given by god
So, don't blame men for their trouble-making conduct
Note:  this short poem was obtained from visiting Dan Xia Mountain in which  a huge penis-like stone stands vertically high. It's just amazing. And in Chinese slang, "the half sky" refers to women.
附:中文原作(皆为笔者原创作品)
须眉烦恼胜红颜
一柱欲破半边天
阳物本性神使然
休怪男儿多事端
注：粤仁化丹霞山中有一怪石，极似男人阳具，仰天直立，高十丈。

童天鉴日

唉 有歧義

周道模

再大胆些啊！
worse可以不用
thrust ---- prick ?           organ ---- penis ?

张马沙

原帖由 周道模 于 2008-6-17 18:47:00 发表
再大胆些啊！
worse可以不用
thrust ---- prick ?           organ ---- penis ?

好建议，谢谢！