《七步詩》- 曹植 (bilingual)

周道模 · 发表于 2009-7-19 18:43:00

fry us? fry me?

宛城卧龙 · 发表于 2009-7-19 20:13:00

“We come from the same root-genes,

Why want to fry us so rush so hot?”

这两句处理的很好

既然用了WE 第二句为何不加上 YOU 呢?

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-7-19 23:53:00

how about cauldron?

since they come from the same root,
why boil the beans so urgently?

the original has no first or second persons. it's better to use the third person.

嘉木子 · 发表于 2009-7-20 23:47:00

“We come from the same root-genes,

Why want to fry us so rush so hot?”

向自娱君学习

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-7-21 22:56:00

My version will be given soon and get your bricks ready, please.

宛城卧龙 · 发表于 2009-7-22 21:23:00

AH

OK

I AM WAITING FOR THAT !

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《七步詩》- 曹植 (bilingual)

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