你，依然活着【双语+ing】

宛城卧龙

只是偶然间，你守候了这深夜
这句写的漂亮

嘉木子

原帖由 童天鉴日 于 2009-8-1 21:17:00 发表
依然活着，诗意的活着！

谢谢童天 近来辛苦了

嘉木子

原帖由 周道模 于 2009-8-2 17:55:00 发表
__ to the poeple at night?

谢谢道模君:):coffee

嘉木子

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-8-3 8:34:00 发表
Will fly in the soft moonlight of tomorrow any time
Will fly in the soft moonlight any time tomorrow?

谢谢青衫兄鼓励和意见

嘉木子

[quote] 原帖由 firefly 于 2009-8-4 14:18:00 发表
[帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-8-3 8:340 发表
Will fly in the soft moonlight of tomorrow any time
Will fly in the soft moonlight any time tomorrow?
嘉木调整句序是为了押韵吗
我这里也拟了另一个韵脚 聊以共娱 呵呵
The birds hiding in willow/ the birds hidden by leaves of willow
Anytime you'll fly in soft moonlight tomorrow
是的，我是为了押韵才调整句序的，再次感谢你一直对小诗的讨论:coffee 希望能继续“砸”下去

嘉木子

原帖由 卧龙先生 于 2009-8-5 11:34:00 发表
只是偶然间，你守候了这深夜

这句写的漂亮

哈哈
问候卧龙兄 近来辛苦了 你也进入复习了吧

自娱自乐

shǒu hòu ㄕㄡˇ ㄏㄡˋ
守候　


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◎ 守候 shǒuhòu

(1) [expect]∶看护;护理

妈妈日夜在医院里守候着外婆

(2) [wait]∶等候

她没有睡觉,正在守候他的归来。——《红岩》


Watch for sb and sth = to look and wait for sb / sth to appear or for sth to happen

Jiajun, what does your 'shouhou' in your poem really mean?

Do you mean to 'mind sth' (watch = mind)?  

嘉木子

i think that is the first explanation.do you think i should choose "watch for" or "wait for"?which is better?if you were me.

嘉木子

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-8-9 4:10:00 发表
shǒu hòu ㄕㄡˇ ㄏㄡˋ
守候　


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◎ 守候 shǒuhòu

(1) [expect]∶看护;护理

妈妈日夜在医院里守候着外婆

(2)

i think that is the first explanation.do you think i should choose "watch for" or "wait for"?which is better?if you were me.

天路客

there is a phrase named night watch, why not try to use watch as vt. :D