（古诗英译）《念奴娇·赤壁怀古》- 苏轼

薛湃

还有一个小问题：
自娱君译文上阙中的Zhou和下阙中的Zhouyu不妨统一为Zhou（与只用姓氏的Cao一致），只需一处加注；同时后文的Cao也应加注。

无心剑

很高兴薛兄指出无心剑译文不足之处，已作修改。

大江东去，
浪淘尽千古风流人物。
故垒西边，
人道是三国周郎赤壁。
乱石穿空，
惊涛拍岸，
卷起千堆雪。
江山如画，
一时多少豪杰。

The Great River eastward flows;
All past great men are washed away by billows.
West of the ancient fort the Red Cliff stays same;
Where General Zhou of Three Kingdoms won his fame.
Rugged rocks tower into the skies;
Terrifying waves swash the shore with cries
To roll up thousands of heaps of snow.
What a picturesque land on show!
O so many heroes have bursted into glow!

遥想公瑾当年。
小乔初嫁了，
雄姿英发。
羽扇纶巾，
谈笑间，
樯橹灰飞烟灭
故国神游，
多情应笑我，
早生华发。
人间如梦，
一樽还酹江月。

I fancy General Zhou brave and bright in his prime;
With his new bride Xiaoqiao, he had such happy time!
Wearing a silk hood and holding a feather fan in hand;
Laughing and jesting, he ruined Cao's warships as planned.
Should their souls revisit the familiar land,
They might tease my sentimentality and say,
"You are still young, yet hair has turned gray."
Alas! Life is nothing but a dream,
Let me make a libation to the moon on the stream!

自娱自乐

谢谢薛君的点评

Eastbound the Great River runs on and on,
With its billows all gallant heroes in history are gone.
The Red Cliff is at the westside of the ancient fort;
A battle betwix Zhou and Cao of Three Kingdoms was fought,
Rugged rocks stand so tall as to cleave cloud,
Tidal waves swash the shore so loud.
Swirling and spiraling thousands of splashes like snow,
O,what a sensational nation! And only ages ago,
It boasted of making many a valiant fellow!

I can fancy Zhou* was brave and bright in his heyday,
Who wedded his bride - Xiaoqiao*, O, hurray!
Wearing a silk headband with a feather fan in hand,  
Laughing and lauding, he gave his command -
To have Cao's warships burnt down in disgrace.
Should their spirits rejoin at this place,
They would definitely tease me to say,
'So sentimental, still young, yet hair's turned gray'
Alas! Life is nothing but a dream,
Let me drain my drink for the moon and stream.

薛湃

Hurray，二君译文！:D
我想自己再翻译一次，奈何好词都被你们用尽了，只好作罢。正是：

眼前有词翻不得，二君佳译在上头。

青衫来客

老自头这篇翻译文气纵横，难得佳作。大赏！

自娱自乐

呵呵呵，喜欢这样的交流，呵呵呵

自娱自乐

故国神游，
多情应笑我，
早生华发。

可改译为

Should their spirits rejoin at this place,
They would tease me to say,
....