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放眼国内,居然未见过英文诗比我写得好的,都出家了?

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-2 15:34:30 | 显示全部楼层

Wine III , II, I

本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 04:58 编辑

Wine III - Wine for Poet (2/22/10)
Drug is for athletes
Ecstasy is for scientists
Panacea is for politicians
Wine is for artists
Red wine is for musicians
Ice wine is for painters
Whiskey is for novelists
Only Brandy is for poets
Louis XIII is for Whitman
Martell is for Wordsworth
Remy Martin is for Shakespeare
Only Hennessy is for Frontier Poet
Wine - 219
During past several months
Planning to write about wine
When I was drinking wine
I could not produce a line
French Brandy
Scottish Whisky
Italian red wine
German white wine
Canadian ice wine
Wine to poet like
Car to driver
Gun to hunter
Finger to programmer
Mind to thinker
When serving with food
Wine becomes servant
When serving without food
Wine becomes master
No best wine coming from bar
No best wine taster is a wine maker
Wine II - 252
Some are red
Some are white
Some are black
Some are transparent
Some are yellow
Some are big and bold
Some are earthy and spicy
some are smooth and supple
Some are light and fruity
Some are fresh and crisp
Some are rich and creamy
No matter what you are consuming
Let them serve you
Instead of your serving them

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老弟,别instead of you serve them好不好?硬伤耶! 改成rather than you serve them行不?  发表于 2010-9-2 18:34
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-2 15:37:12 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 04:58 编辑

诸位,一句话:少评头论足,有空出来练练,让大家欣赏一下你的英文原创!
另外欢迎纠错,欢迎拿砖头砸我!

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发表于 2010-9-2 18:12:06 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 poemhunter 于 2010-9-2 18:30 编辑

No Title

You see yourself like Shakespeare
He likens himself to Napoleon
She ranks herself over Madam Curie
I claim myself as God Himself!

So everybody self-praises as Somebody,
And God peeps down and steals a laugh.
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发表于 2010-9-2 18:18:37 | 显示全部楼层
“行万里路藏千卷书品百种酒达十年球为一杆旗
耕一亩地筑十只巢引百尾凤养千里马做万户侯”

欣赏!请frontierpoet把它译成英文怎样?
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-2 19:16:04 | 显示全部楼层
这是在中文思考模式(10%, 我的90%时间用英文思考)下来的灵感,有必要也没时间。这里还有文化的问题,所谓只可意会不可言传

Inspiration (December 11, 2008) - 82

It might happen
anytime anywhere in anyway
But you do not know
when where and how

It is holy oracle
It is the stairway to heaven
It is the field of gold
It is crown jewelry

It is instant instead of constant
It is unconscious instead of deliberate
It is disposable instead of reusable
It is for here instead of to go

How can I survive without you
Only you, only you
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-3 17:08:29 | 显示全部楼层
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    领导发言啊?
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发表于 2010-9-3 17:14:31 | 显示全部楼层
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欣赏,学习!
   
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-4 09:34:53 | 显示全部楼层
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    武术爱好者想跟《敢死队》主演李连杰“大师”过招,同学你说他会干吗?他想干他会有这个时间吗?
记住真正的大师大隐隐于市,是不屑在舞台上表演的,他们不会在乎专业或业余的评论
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-6 02:42:02 | 显示全部楼层
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    是吗?
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发表于 2010-9-6 07:41:13 | 显示全部楼层
hehe, even though there is a poet who outshines you, he/she might not come here to show his/her outstanding talent, so there is no need for you to be too self-conceited here.
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