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自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-5-1 09:32:00

原帖由 嘉木子 于 2009-5-1 9:04:00 发表
Who is /that lass picking /at the/ mulberry boughs
need "at"can be show the rhythm of poem,isn't?

Who is /that lass / picking at / the mul/berry boughs

这样是否好一点？

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-5-1 09:40:00

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2009-5-1 5:17:00 发表
welcome your oppinion, firefly.

what I mean is that the attention of the poet is only on the hand of the girl, not on what she is picking. He doesn't care what she's picking, leaves or boughs. He ......

ditto

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-5-2 03:33:00

rhythm is one of my considerations

嘉木子 · 发表于 2009-5-17 22:32:00

提上赏读

宛城卧龙 · 发表于 2009-5-17 23:20:00

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