同题诗翻译《如梦令》（李清照）

自娱自乐

Anyhow, I thank you for pointing out my bad. :P

天路客

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-9-27 14:57:00 发表
Anyhow, I thank you for pointing out my bad. :P

sir, somehow i consider it a pleasure to point out your bad.:P

海外逸士

这个'when'是否可以去了？

因為我要與下句連起來﹐所以不能去掉。如果單獨成句﹐可以去掉。語法都對﹐一切
決定于上下文及譯者意圖。

自娱自乐

原帖由 天路客 于 2009-9-28 0:18:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-9-27 14:57:00 发表
Anyhow, I thank you for pointing out my bad. :P

sir, somehow i consider it a pleasure to point out your bad.:P [/quote]

Well, that is terrific if my bad can somewhat please you. :P

And I hope you could keep your eyes wide open for my bad all the time, and guess what? I think I would highly appreciate it and reward you for doing so. Cheers! :D

自娱自乐

I see your point, and thanks a lot for your reply.