江南春杜牧 (同题翻译）

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-10-26 23:34:00

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Orioles wabble in the green trees and red flowers for far and wide
The wineshop signs sway with wind at the foot of hill and lakeside
There're four hundred and eighty temples in the southern dynasty
How many of them still remain standing as it being rainy and misty

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-10-30 10:28:00

千里鶯啼綠映紅，水村山郭酒旗風。南朝四百八十寺，多少樓台煙雨中.

Green leaves hugging red flowers in sight; over miles echos oriole's singing,
The water front village walled by hill; banners on tavern in breeze fluttering.
There were four hundred and four score temples in Southern Realm,
How many pavilions and towers now does mist and rain overwhlem?

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-10-30 11:02:00

So delighted to see you show yourself again. A nice version, buddy.

诗人丁白 · 发表于 2009-10-30 11:28:00

欣赏

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-10-31 09:56:00

Hi buddie, thanks for your good words.

Could you please change 'flying' to 'fluttering' for me in the top post?

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-10-31 13:17:00

Ok, I will do it right away.

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-11-1 00:11:00

So, you show up at last, Mr. Self amusement.

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-11-1 03:53:00

Thanks a lot for your help!

One more request, see if you could remove that "are" before 'fluttering'?

Many thanks!

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-11-1 03:54:00

hehehe, have you been missing me? hahaha

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-11-2 23:57:00

where's the word fluttering in my version? maybe, you refer to another translation?

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