【古诗英译】《梅花》 宋·王安石

薛湃

在下之见，“遥”译成afar，at/from a distance均无不可。闻到花香之人可以是——如金沙君所言——在室内、书房里，但也可以在室外、在较远之处。

无心剑

原帖由 薛湃 于 2009-11-25 14:20:00 发表
Mume Flowers

Some twigs of mume at the corner alone
Are against sharp cold growing on their own.
From far away I know they are not snows-
There's faint scent waft by waft greeting my nose......

薛兄，不妨稍作调整。

Some mume twigs at the corner alone
Grow against sharp cold on their own.
From afar I know they are not snows -
Waft by waft faint scent greets my nose.

薛湃

经无心君妙手一改，简洁多了。谢谢指教！