中诗会员梓煜作品五首翻译

无心剑

欲寄相思叶，
嫣红尚待时。
托言南去雁，
报与汝先知。
To send you a leaf for my yearning,
But I find it still has not turned red.
O, I wish the wild geese south-flying
To first tell you my longing instead.

梓煜

有这么多的朋友进行英文交流，真是一件快乐的事

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-11-25 16:16:00 发表
1. away, 也有形容词的意思，不光是副词，但原句不妥，已改。2. trust somebody to do something也是一种用法。多谢了！

是，同意，away 还能充当形容词。

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-11-25 16:16:00 发表
2. trust somebody to do something也是一种用法。多谢了！

Yep, you are right. But my point is on 托言南去雁

托言 -  entrust goose with a word

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无心剑

同意自娱兄译法。

自娱自乐

托言南去雁，
报与汝先知。

try

I entrust geese flying southward with a word,
To let you know first what I have treasured.

无心剑

妙！妙！无心剑佩服！

薛湃

谢谢青衫君的勉励。我只是闲来凑趣罢了，还请多批评指教。:D

自娱自乐

呵呵呵，也来凑凑热闹，:P


欲寄相思叶，
嫣红尚待时。
托言南去雁，
报与汝先知。


To send off a leaf that shows my love for you,
Yet it hasn't turned red as it is expected to do.
So I entrust geese who fly south with my word,
To let you know first what I've really treasured.

无心剑

自娱兄到底棋高一招啊！