【英文小诗】<Grief> 诗/无心剑

铁_冰

You left me without even a word; 你一言不发离我而去
No more can your voice be heard!再也听不到你的话语
You cruelly take my heart away;   你残忍地将我心夺走
So soon my hair has turned gray. 让我转眼间白发满头
Cup after cup I drink bitter wine;  我一杯一杯喝着苦酒
Tearfully, more and more I pine.   滴滴泪水将思念湿透
Grief gnaws my soul every night,  哀愁夜夜在断肠摧肝
Without you nothing can be right.没有你一切都是扯淡

铁_冰

冒用剑兄风格，以豆腐块译之。

自娱自乐

原帖由 铁_冰 于 2009-12-23 17:01:00 发表
You left me without even a word; 你一言不发离我而去
No more can your voice be heard!再也听不到你的话语
You cruelly take my heart away;   你残忍地将我心夺走
So soon my hair has turned gray. 让我转眼......

无心剑

铁兄，这首小诗被你译得天衣无缝，音美、形美、意美，无心剑佩服！！！

自娱自乐

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-12-23 17:27:00 发表
铁兄，这首小诗被你译得天衣无缝，音美、形美、意美，无心剑佩服！！！

:P :P :P

无心剑

呵呵，铁兄曾说过，铁冰可以模仿无心剑译诗风格，但是无心剑却模仿不了铁冰译诗风格，诚哉斯言！！！

自娱自乐

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-12-23 17:33:00 发表
呵呵，铁兄曾说过，铁冰可以模仿无心剑译诗风格，但是无心剑却模仿不了铁冰译诗风格，诚哉斯言！！！

wuxin, you need to trust your own ability, hehehe

Idolization won't help you much ...hehehe

无心剑

ziyu, you are right, I need to trust myself.

自娱自乐

Yes, if they can do it, so can you!

I believe you have already outshone many in this field.

无心剑

呵呵，有信心在译诗上超越许多人，所以一直在琢磨译诗的门道，不断实践，提高译诗技艺。