【古诗英译】《绝句》唐·杜甫

无心剑

绝句
Quatrain
杜甫
by Du Fu
两个黄鹂鸣翠柳，
一行白鹭上青天。
窗含西岭千秋雪，
门泊东吴万里船。
Two golden orioles twitter on the green willow,
A row of snowy egrets fly towards the sky blue.
The window frames West Hill's perennial snow,
Outdoors moor boats from the distant East Wu.

译于2007年2月5日。

【自娱自乐译本】

Two orioles warble on willows,
A row of egrets soar to the sky.
The snowy West-Hill in windows,
Boats of East Wu moor close by.

自娱自乐

无心君，oriole = 黄鹂，我认为无需yellow。白鹭也是一个道理

自娱自乐

perennial snow ----用得好！
学了，呵呵呵

无心剑

谢谢自娱兄指点，已作修改。

金沙文字

“西岭”在这里是指“西岭雪山”，地名。"west hill"不准确，也可将就。
“东吴”是国名，"East Wu"也不准确，中国人理解没问题。the wu country in the dynasty of three kingdoms.

铁_冰

金沙兄所言的问题很难在译文中解决，因为这会导致译文过长。
我想可以让译文保留west will、east Wu等字眼，再在后面加注。

金沙文字

加注好，正文可以精炼。

自娱自乐

原帖由 金沙文字 于 2010-1-2 14:07:00 发表
“西岭”在这里是指“西岭雪山”，地名。"west hill"不准确，也可将就。
“东吴”是国名，"East Wu"也不准确，中国人理解没问题。the wu country in the dynasty of three kingdoms.

老金头，你是否得了‘遗忘症’？喝呵呵

金沙文字

:D.................................:o

自娱自乐

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