王维诗《山中》英译

铁_冰

山中
王维
荆溪白石出，
天寒红叶稀。
山路元无雨，
空翠湿人衣。
【铁冰译文】
In Mountains
In Jing brook white stones are bare,
As in cold days red leaves rare.
Though no rain's on mountain roads,
Men‘s clothes are wet with verdant air.
改译：
In brooks so clear white stones are bare,
In days now so cold red leaves rare.
There‘s no rain on mountain roads though,
Men‘s gowns are wet with verdant air.
【自娱自乐译文】
The white boulders rise as the Jingxi water runs slow,
A few maple leaves dot about in spite of a wintry blow,
Although no rain has been upon the mountain road yet,
The verdure looks dewy as if it could brush one’s robe wet.
【无心剑译文】
On the Mountain
The blue brook exposes white stones to the air,
Red leaves turn sparse in coldness everywhere.
On the mountain paths no rain sprinkles down,
While the empty green mist dampens my gown.

自娱自乐

原帖由 铁_冰 于 2010-2-7 12:30:00 发表
山中
王维
荆溪白石出，
天寒红叶稀。
山路元无雨，
空翠湿人衣。
【铁冰译文】
In Mountains
In Jing brook white stones are bare,
As in cold days red leaves (are) rare.
Though no rain's on mountain roads,
Men‘s clothes are wet with verdant air.

呵呵呵，好个铁皇上，硬是不学无心君的豆腐干体，哈哈哈

自娱自乐

有特色，不错，学习了。呵呵呵

铁_冰

少废话，快交作业!

自娱自乐

hehehe, wuxinjian and I hve done our job, please go and find it yourself, hehehe:P

铁_冰

lazy！

自娱自乐

lazy? why?
Ok, I show you, hahaha
You are a slack boy yourself, hahaha

铁_冰

哈哈，sorry
我以前还读过你们的译文呢，年纪大了，忘得快……

自娱自乐

原帖由 铁_冰 于 2010-2-7 14:45:00 发表
哈哈，sorry
我以前还读过你们的译文呢，年纪大了，忘得快……

O, yeah, hehehe, seven and twenty, hehehe

rlee

铁饼多大了？