【汉英双语】114、《无痕》

无心剑

无痕
No Trace
夜阑漫天雪，
长街静烟尘。
言亡思虑绝，
情事了无痕。
Snow veils the sky late at night;
The street sees no dust in flight.
Because words and worries die,
The trace of love is out of sight.
译于2010年12月22日。
【小烛版】
Snow falls wildly beneath the nights' darkness.
In the street long dust is settled aground.
Words lost, my thoughts struck in sadness.
So ends our love story, no trace can be found.
【自娱自乐版】
Late at night snow blankets the sky
In street no dust at all stands by.
As my words and worries are to die,
Let alone love trace in mine eye.
【晚枫版】
Midnight snow saturates the sky
In streets no soot or dust strolls by
Now my words  and worries gone dead
As all traces of love have fled

自娱自乐

各有千秋，欣赏，学习啦，呵呵呵

自娱自乐

Ok, I also try my hand at it for fun...hehehe
夜阑漫天雪，
长街静烟尘。
言亡思虑绝，
情事了无痕。
Late at night snow blankets the sky
In street no dust at all stands by.
As my words and worries are to die,
Let alone love trace in mine eye.

Loon

The trace of love is out of sight.

But not out of mind. Is it?

In the street long dust is settled aground.

为什么不说 long street 呢？ 我第一次读成 long dust 了。  

Rhapsodia

Let me have a try for fun thx to Jian Jun!
Midnight snow saturates the sky
In streets no soot or dust strolls by
Now my words  and worries gone dead
As all traces of love have fled

自娱自乐

剑君说这几天他碰到一些不顺心的事，呵呵呵，所以我今天‘舍命陪君子’，热闹一下这里死沉沉的气氛，为剑君宽心解闷，呵呵呵

Loon

自娱自乐

替剑君谢过Loon 先生！

Loon

笑吧，晚枫君。我早已说过，我的东西在这里是不入流的。

Loon

是啊， 看起来他们是老铁。