请逸士和各位高手赏读和商榷这首毛诗的译文。。。

自娱自乐

不可能。 you = peaks, 不可能是 sky. sky 都 falls with leaks, 怎么能 as pillars to sustain?

自娱自乐

这个是可能的。。。呵呵呵

Loon

The sky nearly falls with leaks.
And you like pillars it sustain.

you = peaks, like pillars, sustain  it = the sky

常用的倒装押韵法。 呵呵， 现在对倒装较敏感了。

自娱自乐

Loon 发表于 2011-2-10 09:06
you = peaks, like pillars, sustain  it = the sky

常用的倒装押韵法。 呵呵， 现在对倒装较敏感了。 ...

恕我不能苟同。

If it = the sky, its verb sustain should be sustains.

Hang on for a second, you mean peaks sustain it - the sky? well, it is weird...as well as confusing...

自娱自乐

well, it could say ' blah..blah...with leaks, but which you like pillars sustain, would it be the same stuff? why need that shitty it for?

自娱自乐

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Loon, in regard to so-called reverse-rhyming, I wonder if you could give me some info...many thanks!

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哈，这还不是看诸位频频使用而创造的一个术语。

啊，原来是这么一会事，呵呵呵

So, another word, there isn't such a thing or...?