【汉诗英译】在唐诗的故乡——王妍丁

周道模

      在唐诗的故乡
In the Hometown of the Poetry of the Tang Dynasty
王妍丁 著  周道模 译
Wr. by Wang Yandin   Tr. by Zhou Daomo
这一年的端午
我在古都长安
以诗歌的名义朝拜
一支艾
一支被大雨淋湿的艾
被我插上云鬓
天街上从此长出一味
苦药
At the Dragon Boat Festival of this year
In the ancient capital Changan
I worshiped a wormwood
in the name of poetry
I inserted a wormwood wetted by heavy rain
in my hair
From then on in the Emperor’s Street
one bitter medicine has been growing
一个穿长衫的诗人郎中
一生只医治过一个病人
他却驱走了
一个朝代的顽疾
在长安街阴凉的露水中
我和一个叫安子的诗人
在一首诗里静坐
以诗歌的名义
我们谈论诗与人
A poet doctor wearing a gown
only healed one patient in his life
But he drove away the stubborn disease of a dynasty
In the cool dew of Changan Street
A poet called Anzi and I
sitting quietly in a piece of poem
We talked about poems and people
in the name of poetry
有的人死了他还活着
以诗歌的名义站立
他的骨头离大地最近
离天空最近
离人心最近
每一株小草都愿意朝向他
就像朝向星光和太阳
Some died, but he is still alive
still standing in his poems
with his bones closest to the earth
closest to the heaven
and closest to the public feeling
Any of the grass will orient to him
just like facing the stars and the sun
2012-4-11 译于 连山

宛城卧龙

问候周兄 欣赏

周道模

问候周兄 欣赏[/quote]
谢谢卧龙鼓励！请对英语提意见！

す單細胞す

Some died, but still alive.
Amid poems, he is on the feet
With his bone closest to the earth,
The heaven
And to the human psyche.
Any of the grass may turn to face him
As face the stars and the sun.

周道模

谢谢卧龙鼓励！请对英语提意见！[/quote]
这个不应该。谢谢指教！

周道模

Some died, but still alive.
Amid poems, he is on the feet
With his bone closest to the earth,
[/quote]
单细胞也可分裂出来。{:soso_e113:}
谢谢指教，吸收了部分好译！

木樨黄谷

问候老周，辛勤的译家啊

宛城卧龙

问候周兄  收到大作，正在拜读中  祝贺祝贺

周道模

问候老周，辛勤的译家啊[/quote]
谢谢木樨君！勤能补拙啊！

周道模

问候周兄  收到大作，正在拜读中  祝贺祝贺[/quote]
卧龙高卧南阳，请多指点拙诗。春风吹拂你。