去年的那几天(英译中)

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春風玉兔

春風風，綠柳柳，春風憐綠柳

玉兔兔，玩家家，玉兔是玩家

急急雨，青青秧，布穀催農插

悠悠雲，竅竅女，清溪浣綺紗

注：第一二句羅志海作，第三四句錢永德作。

The Spring Breeze And The Jade Hare

The spring breeze

the green willow

the spring breeze pities

on the green willow

The jade hare

playing house

the jade hare is

the game player in the house

The quick rain

the green rice seedlings

cuckoos urge

farmers transplanting

The leisure clouds

the pretty lady

in the clear stream

washes the beautiful gauze kerchief

Note: first and second sentences by Luo Zhihai.

Third and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.

8/2/2018對聯體 ● 十一絕 羅志海譯

Couplet Poem ● Eleven Words of Quatrain

Translation by Luo Zhihai

第6610首對聯體詩

The 6,610th Couplet Poem

再见庚甲

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再见庚甲 发表于 2018-8-3 11:29
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谢谢诗友！

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Days Of Yesteryear

Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan （Netherlands）

From a distance I was looking at the horizon
of you I heard not a thing, of the Everglades, a yes!

like someone who was splashing in the water
and was looking forward anxiously

and quay anchorage in green waters
so you were not blind; - just under the veils

for you, God saved the earth
just to let you stay alive

and Zeus turned out to be one spitting tent
only for you, and Zephyr showed himself especially for you

on the shore of darkness, he waited for you
ripples in the cloudy water could be seen
which began slowly on to grow

and quay anchorage was nowhere to find
just crocodile tears were everywhere

a budding love had arisen at midnight
and the awful view disappeared, as you expected

the dark night took its place
and presented the loveliest morning glow

God has chosen you and you are not lost
even the mockingbird made a deep bow for you

you only don't know, my love
you are God's child so mild….

My NOTE:
The Everglades, great waters in Florida, the USA, especially the home for crocodiles, but odd enough I noticed that men have built their houses nearby the croc's homes.

去年的那几天

希尔维亚•弗朗西丝•陈（荷兰）/诗

罗志海（中国）/译

从远处我望着地平线
我聆听你，大沼泽地，是的！

就像有人在水里劈啪
焦急地期待着

绿色水域码头锚地
所以你没瞎
只是在面纱下

为了你，上帝拯救了地球
只是为了让你活下

宙斯装扮成一个流口水的帐篷
只为你，西风为你露身影

在黑暗的岸上，他等着你
能看到云水涟漪
开始慢慢生成

码头锚地找也找不到
仅只鳄鱼眼泪无处不在

午夜时萌生了爱
可怕的景象消失了，正如你所期待

黑夜占据了它的位置
呈现了最可爱的朝霞

上帝选择了你，你没有迷失
甚至嘲鸟也深深地为你鞠躬垂首

你只是不知道，我的爱
你是上帝的孩子如此温柔……


我的注释：
大沼泽地，美国佛罗里达州的大水域，特别是鳄鱼的栖息地。但奇怪的是，我注意到人们已经在鳄鱼家附近建造了他们的房子。

8/25/2018译

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Panter

Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan （Netherlands）

This is a sad rememberance
no any reference
but she is the only cat
a toy for me, my dearest pet

all of a sudden
a sad rememberance this morn
I had mourned, now still mourn
this path deepest trodden

is life like this?
her death, certainly a bliss
she needs suffer no more
my dearest pet has no pains anymore....

Note: Panter died on AD. Friday the 4th Oct 2013
She rest in Peace in the eternal hunting fields


潘特

希尔维亚•弗朗西丝•陈（荷兰）/诗
罗志海（中国）/译


这是一个悲伤的回忆
没有任何参照
她是唯一的猫
我的玩具，我最亲爱的宠物猫

一切突然来到
今早悲伤忆起
我曾哀悼，现在仍在哀悼
最深刻地践踏在这条小道

生命就是这样吗？
她死了，当然早登极乐
她无须再忍受
不再疼痛，我最亲爱的宠物猫……

注：潘特于公元2013年10月4日星期五逝世。
她在永恒的狩猎场中安息。


8/27/2018译

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casper 发表于 2018-8-27 10:19
春風風，綠柳柳，春風憐綠柳    （敢问：“春風風，柳绿绿，春風拂柳绿”如何？）           玉兔兔，玩家 ...

柳绿绿，不行的，
柳绿与春风结构不同
拂，怜，都可以

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casper 发表于 2018-8-27 15:19
The Spring Breeze And The Jade Hare
The spring breeze           敢问何不：  ( With the kindness )th ...

你说的，太深奥了，我回答不了。

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我这首诗，有点像绕口令，有点像打油诗，游戏性质居多。不必太当真。
太当真了不好玩。