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自娱自乐

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2009-5-15 5:52:00 发表
究竟人聽晚鐘﹐還是月聽晚鐘﹖

当然是人，所以我才在初版中试用ｅｖｅｎ，暗示不光人在听，连月亮也在听，这不是ｓｕｐｅｒ　ｒｏｍａｎｔｉｃ还能是什么呢？

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-15 7:58:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 海外逸士 于 2009-5-15 5:52:00 发表
究竟人聽晚鐘﹐還是月聽晚鐘﹖

海外老师，当然是人听晚钟。月本无耳，如何能听？自娱此处所译不确。问候您！ [/quote]
月过清溪听晚钟
这个‘月过’我当时认为有谐音的可能，表示作者越过小溪。。。

既然不好，那就 delete it! Is there a point of airing it here? I know you are absolutely capable of doing it on your own, well, good on you, go ahead!:P

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-14 8:33:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-5-14 6:25:00 发表
青衫君，你是‘醉翁之意不在酒’啊，呵呵呵

Haha, I will come to find you for a drink soon and I know for sure where you are now. You bloody guy, do you think that y [/quote]

hahaha, it is not funny at all,mate!

童天鉴日

诗意很有流动感，愉快中...

青衫来客

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-5-14 6:09:00 发表
Anyhow, I give it a try again for your comments..^_^

The Mountain Temple (A)

Now empty is the temple, and red is the sunglow,
Swallow greets wind while willow sways its cute shadow.
Under the ......

This is a perfect translation. Without a little pressure, you would not show yourself here and join us for pleasure.

嘉木子

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-5-14 6:09:00 发表
Anyhow, I give it a try again for your comments..^_^

The Mountain Temple (A)

Now empty is the temple, and red is the sunglow,
Swallow greets wind while willow sways its cute shadow.
Under the ......

又来偷师了，学习，赞个好

宛城卧龙

呵呵
过来学习
问好二位先生

青衫来客

自娱这厮是开豆油厂的，榨出来的才是好东西。

自娱自乐

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